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A Note In the Wind

A note in the wind is released by our soul,
borne of burning yearning to unite with God,
for entwinement alone will make us feel whole,
so in silence we enter our heart unshod,
feeling therein divine bliss, scriptures extol,
becoming the flame itself, that leaves us awed.
Our unvoiced intent thus released into space,
ignites bliss within, as outpourings of grace.

27-October-2022

(not for contest)

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Valsa George October 27, 2022 at 9:41 PM There is an inner urge in man to get unted with GOd. That search after God has been there even from the very inception of man's arrival on earth. Until we merge with Him and become one flame, man will be restless inside. Some can discern the cause of this restlessness and turn to God. They are fortunate. Great poem, dear Seeker friend.... Unseeking Seeker October 27, 2022 at 10:17 PM We turn to God only when we reach point of exhaustion, recognising that bliss eternal cannot be found in transience external. Even then, inexplicably very few turn inwards

Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2022 at 11:33 AM - Lovely ... let these words fly far and wide with the wind ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Unseeking Seeker October 27, 2022 at 5:51 PM Contest requires free verse Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2022 at 11:34 AM (not for contest) ? Why ?

Darlene De Beaulieu October 27, 2022 at 8:09 AM Hello Unseeking Seeker, a lovely message from the wind. My fav. blessings my friend. Darlene. Darlene De Beaulieu October 28, 2022 at 11:29 AM Unseeking Seeker you are wecome. Blessing my friend Unseeking Seeker October 27, 2022 at 8:46 AM Thank you, Darlene!

Victor Buhagiar October 27, 2022 at 8:04 AM Nothing is more important than an outpouring of grace. Unseeking Seeker October 27, 2022 at 8:46 AM Yes. We must invite grace, however.