A Note In the Wind

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A note in the wind is released by our soul,
borne of burning yearning to unite with God,
for entwinement alone will make us feel whole,
so in silence we enter our heart unshod,
feeling therein divine bliss, scriptures extol,
becoming the flame itself, that leaves us awed.
Our unvoiced intent thus released into space,
ignites bliss within, as outpourings of grace.

27-October-2022

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Valsa George

Date: 10/27/2022 9:41:00 PM

There is an inner urge in man to get unted with GOd. That search after God has been there even from the very inception of man's arrival on earth. Until we merge with Him and become one flame, man will be restless inside. Some can discern the cause of this restlessness and turn to God. They are fortunate. Great poem, dear Seeker friend....

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/27/2022 10:17:00 PM

We turn to God only when we reach point of exhaustion, recognising that bliss eternal cannot be found in transience external. Even then, inexplicably very few turn inwards