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A Not So Distant Memory

I sit in a darkened room on a damp, dreary day, thinking about a certain someone and about a certain perfume... both aroused my senses, both aroused my needs. She was a beautiful young woman of grace, and I, a headstrong young man, our eyes met, my heart began to race, this young maiden I just knew that it had to be. Our time was grand, it churned passionately for a time; this young maiden and that certain perfume fueled me, but like an uncontrollable wildfire it had to be extinguished. That was many years ago, our love - my loss, my heart was ripped in two, her memory haunts me so... that certain someone, that certain perfume. For "Free Verse Frenzy" contest sponsored by Catie Lindsey.

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Date: 3/23/2011 4:06:00 AM
Beautiful poem on love and loss. We have all been there, George. So well expressed. Congratulations on your win:))
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Date: 3/22/2011 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving win in Catie's "Free Verse Frenzy" Contest, George! Beautiful indeed. Annalise
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Date: 3/21/2011 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations to you George for your win in Catie's contest "Free Verse Frenzy". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2011 7:11:00 AM
Great writing, George. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Elaine
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Date: 3/21/2011 12:43:00 AM
i have tp say this is awesome... best congrats for the great win! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/20/2011 3:36:00 PM
Congrats George on your amazing win in Catie;s contest ..an excellent entry my friend.. enjoy another chart topping win with luv..
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Date: 3/20/2011 11:45:00 AM
Loved this one too. A nice, gentle, nostalgic romance-oriented write that gives the reader a somber moment to pause and reflect within one's heart. So nicely written. Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Catie's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 3/20/2011 10:09:00 AM
George, every time I smell Aramis, I think of my late husband. Scents can really bring back the memories. This is a truly moving poem and I'm so happy to see you in the winners' circle. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/20/2011 8:15:00 AM
Good to see your top ten entry George. Congratulations on your worthy honor in the top 10. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/11/2011 5:30:00 AM
Intensely dramatic write George ..so touching and sensitive on a lost luv.. feeling your pain and loss as so many of us have experienced this too.. good luck in the contest my friend.. a brilliant expose of a crushed heart..luv.. happy weekend... George...
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Date: 3/10/2011 6:30:00 PM
Great piece, George. Excellent entry. Good luyck. Enjoyed. Thanks for your comments. Ralph
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Date: 3/10/2011 2:54:00 PM
Yes, this is definitely free verse, George and I enjoyed it. Good luck in CAties' contest!
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Date: 3/10/2011 2:45:00 PM
What a lovely recollections of the feelings in tranquility, George
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