A Not-So-Gentle Push

It’s easy to do nothing – 
Sit at home and park your tush,
But sometimes you must give yourself
A not-so-gentle push.

And so, on this delightful day
With sunshine in the sky,
I took the subway to a store
With things I like to buy.

The streets were filled with tourists
And the shops festooned with lights.
I stopped to see the Christmas tree
That soars to dizzy heights.

It wasn’t super crowded
And I splurged and bought a dress.
My little push gave me a day
Which was a sweet success.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 12/15/2023 10:41:00 AM
Good for you, Ilene. I have the same/similar problem with getting around to household chores.
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Date: 12/14/2023 7:01:00 AM
This is a nice, light, and festive poem for the holidays. Thanks for the fresh air.
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Date: 12/13/2023 5:23:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Ilene. It is so easy to do nothing and can become a habit that is hard to break. I'm glad you gave yourself that little push out the door. Have a blessed day, my friend.
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Date: 12/13/2023 4:53:00 PM
You’re so right, Ilene. How many jobs have I put off only to feel truly rewarded when I finally got them done. Smartly observed and smartly rhymed… not that I would expect any less from your ‘all seeing pen’. Terry
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Date: 12/13/2023 3:25:00 PM
I just adore this poem ilene and relate totally. Sometimes when motivation lacks its hard to get moving….good on you for pushing yourself and going out and for buying yourself a dress ….you deserved it!! You write so well about everyday happenings…love it! Debx
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