A Night's Sky On the 4th of July

placing a black
match on my
bottle rocket

she's a cherry
bomb with
two cones

on a motar
rack that
makes

my quarter
stack at
least

more than
that but
it's not

reloadable
nor a re
peater

as her ring
shell and
rising

tail take 
in my 
pistol

and mortar
tube like a
roman

candle doing
a few jumping
jacks at low level

expecting a
fountain of
glitter

fish fallout
in an ex
plosive

display of
her fuse
let loose

in a dahlia
and wet
peony

her fire and flare
confuse me as
to where

in the flurry of 
her finale
i be

come
a
dud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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November 7, 2019 at 10:52 PM
oh my ... sad ending.. but great write, all the way... Wonderful. Ann
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November 8, 2019 at 6:16 AM
Thanks Ann. In my older years I'm more of a once in a blue moon man lol.
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