A Night Without the Kids

Yummy Mummy Chubby Hubby Jumping Pumping Moaning Groaning Huffing Puffing ****** Sarcasm Wants more Loud snore
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Mayne Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 11:15 AM
That put a smile on my face, very descriptive with so little words, great fun!!
Mac Donald Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 9:15 AM
Fun, funny write, Shane! I'd already had my morning smile with the last one, now I must look like a grinning ninny. Another wonder of you and your gifted pen! Keep well, Mikki
Cooper Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 3:05 PM
Hi Mikki, I appologise for not replying earlier, I must have missed this one some how. I wrote it in response to a short poem by Jan. I am glad you liked it funny is not one of my strong suits. I have not heard from you for a while is all okay your end?? love shane xxx
Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 3:56 PM
these got better and better. Loved the sarcasm of love making!!
Cooper Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 4:23 PM
I was reading some of jans work and I came across her poem Mummy Dummy And it just flowed from there. Thanks Love Shane xxx
Nance Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 7:18 AM
Funny :) Now in my house a night without the kids would be the snoring part.
Cooper Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 7:55 AM
I am glad you liked it i had not tried anything like this before. It was fun Love Shane xx
Allison Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 1:11 AM
These made me giggle Shane:-) soup mail :-) Hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 1:43 AM
Me risque nooo nooo noo - if any footles were written that were risque it wasn't me lol! :-) hugs Jan x I did some great ones with Tim Smith as a collaboration - they were fun.
Cooper Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 1:15 AM
Could not have written it without Mommy Dummy, and thinking about some of your more riskque efforts. love Shane xxx
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 12, 2015 at 11:59 PM
Very nice pen Shane! Truly enjoyed your piece dear friend .A 7 from me! Have a nice day! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxx D.^0^"
Cooper Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 1:03 AM
Thank you Dorian, I saw a footle that Jan had written that tickled me Mummy Dummy and the poem just jumped into my head. I love it when that happens. Thanks again Love Shane xxx
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