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A NIGHT WITHOUT THE KIDS

Yummy Mummy Chubby Hubby Jumping Pumping Moaning Groaning Huffing Puffing ****** Sarcasm Wants more Loud snore

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Date: 2/8/2015 10:18:00 PM
Mine NEVER leave home..... lol This ways way too cute . Bev
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Shane Cooper
Date: 2/8/2015 11:03:00 PM
Hi Bev, I wrote it after reading one of Jan's poems it was a classic short poem, "mummy dummy" I think is it. I could not resist after that. thanks for dropping in. Love Shane xxx PS Give them some cash and tell them to go to the movies, you never know what could eventuate.
Date: 1/16/2015 9:15:00 AM
Fun, funny write, Shane! I'd already had my morning smile with the last one, now I must look like a grinning ninny. Another wonder of you and your gifted pen! Keep well, Mikki
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Shane Cooper
Date: 2/8/2015 3:05:00 PM
Hi Mikki, I appologise for not replying earlier, I must have missed this one some how. I wrote it in response to a short poem by Jan. I am glad you liked it funny is not one of my strong suits. I have not heard from you for a while is all okay your end?? love shane xxx
Date: 1/13/2015 3:56:00 PM
these got better and better. Loved the sarcasm of love making!!
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Shane Cooper
Date: 1/13/2015 4:23:00 PM
I was reading some of jans work and I came across her poem Mummy Dummy And it just flowed from there. Thanks Love Shane xxx
Date: 1/13/2015 7:18:00 AM
Funny :) Now in my house a night without the kids would be the snoring part.
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Shane Cooper
Date: 1/13/2015 7:55:00 AM
I am glad you liked it i had not tried anything like this before. It was fun Love Shane xx
Date: 1/13/2015 1:11:00 AM
These made me giggle Shane:-) soup mail :-) Hugs jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/13/2015 1:43:00 AM
Me risque nooo nooo noo - if any footles were written that were risque it wasn't me lol! :-) hugs Jan x I did some great ones with Tim Smith as a collaboration - they were fun.
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Shane Cooper
Date: 1/13/2015 1:15:00 AM
Could not have written it without Mommy Dummy, and thinking about some of your more riskque efforts. love Shane xxx
Date: 1/12/2015 11:59:00 PM
Very nice pen Shane! Truly enjoyed your piece dear friend .A 7 from me! Have a nice day! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxx D.^0^"
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Shane Cooper
Date: 1/13/2015 1:03:00 AM
Thank you Dorian, I saw a footle that Jan had written that tickled me Mummy Dummy and the poem just jumped into my head. I love it when that happens. Thanks again Love Shane xxx