A Night Untitled

3 Benadryl
My body is damaged, depleted and drawn tight around my bones
Skin that shivers through the sweat 
A heart never to be trusted.

How many of these edge-balanced days are left?
Give me 1,000. And fill heaven with the stars of night.

In the silence, I hear my skin cells living and dying. Being birthed again. 
And all these miles of nerve fibers. Laid out like twigs. Drenched in kerosene. 

Yes. I'm on fire.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 7/4/2019 11:15:00 AM
Gina, my wife suffers from Fibromyalgia, and I dare say that this poem approximates what she describes when she experiences intense fibro flares. I'm Faving this so I can share it with her. ~Mark
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Gina Young
Date: 7/12/2019 12:52:00 PM
Also... thank you for sharing this with her!
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Gina Young
Date: 7/12/2019 12:51:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comment. I have problems with my nervous system due to diabetes complications. I'm sorry to hear about your wife's illness, I don't know much about fibromyalgia... it's nice to know someone else understands though, as awful as it is.
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