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A Night Under Stars

Sitting beneath the stellar awning
Humbly, shall I comemmorate
Before the sun, creeps in crawling
Every star shall I dedicate
To you, My Love; Look at the skies
For you, My Love, I most despise.
 
To you, I say, in subtle north
Go tell him how my heart did bleed
When he did scowl, as I put forth
The ways I cared and loved indeed
You'd kiss my wounds - control, condole
Then skew them deeper, slaying my soul.
 
In far east, you, so bright yet blank
Have you not seen how hard i wept?
When flowed his eyes, his tears I drank
Did you not count my nights unslept?
And blind, was I, to your disguise
Gaze up, My Love, go find your lies!
 
Weep not, My friend, most close-knit
For you did taste deception bitter
Dazzled like queen, down south you sit
Mere a pawn now of waning glitter
Concur I, My Love, all pretence is sweet!
Until falls the cloak, and truth does greet.
 
Toppled, as I, did west monarch shiver
Warned of haste; but he'd cried my name
Limits, leaped I, not a blink's quiver
For cared I not, if world did blame
In pain, My Love, at me, you mocked
Alone, My Love, left me, you debauched!
 
Sorrow, the sacrifice, you did witness
O! Glazing Moon! Make haste and tell
How profound is hatred, beneath this breast
Where, drenched in love, a heart did dwell
Upon you, My heart, I swear, I proclaim
Sha'n't ever bleed in eye, sha'n't ever take his name.
 
Lo! Behold! Last thing, I wish to confess
If I say unto you, shall I be relieved
For you know me, my heart at best
If I say unto you, shall I be believed
No matter how high may hatred soar
I own, my love shall weigh ever more!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/11/2009 11:59:00 AM
:):) .... Kadeecheeumma Pal ..... Keep those rhymes rolling ......
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:33:00 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Pallavi. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 1:42:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured Pallavi >> James
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Date: 11/30/2009 6:14:00 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 9/19/2009 9:13:00 AM
"Sorrow, the sacrifice, you did witness O! Glazing Moon! Make haste and tell How profound is hatred, beneath this breast Where, drenched in love, a heart did dwell" just marvelous lines Shakespeare would steal them! Light & Love
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Date: 7/27/2009 2:48:00 PM
Good poetry.
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Date: 6/19/2009 8:16:00 AM
I love This one-->To My favs=)
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Date: 6/19/2009 7:05:00 AM
nice poem
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Date: 6/19/2009 6:55:00 AM
up to you! no comments on the same!
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Date: 6/19/2009 6:49:00 AM
I've this poem... anyway, I have some of your poems... do you want me to send via mailsoup?? you can have them back....
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Date: 6/19/2009 6:46:00 AM
I suggest, come with your real name... if you have no issues... instead of poems by "moon of blues' keep by "Pallavi Khera"... anyway, up to you....
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