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A Night Under Stars

Sitting beneath the stellar awning Humbly, shall I comemmorate Before the sun, creeps in crawling Every star shall I dedicate To you, My Love; Look at the skies For you, My Love, I most despise. To you, I say, in subtle north Go tell him how my heart did bleed When he did scowl, as I put forth The ways I cared and loved indeed You'd kiss my wounds - control, condole Then skew them deeper, slaying my soul. In far east, you, so bright yet blank Have you not seen how hard i wept? When flowed his eyes, his tears I drank Did you not count my nights unslept? And blind, was I, to your disguise Gaze up, My Love, go find your lies! Weep not, My friend, most close-knit For you did taste deception bitter Dazzled like queen, down south you sit Mere a pawn now of waning glitter Concur I, My Love, all pretence is sweet! Until falls the cloak, and truth does greet. Toppled, as I, did west monarch shiver Warned of haste; but he'd cried my name Limits, leaped I, not a blink's quiver For cared I not, if world did blame In pain, My Love, at me, you mocked Alone, My Love, left me, you debauched! Sorrow, the sacrifice, you did witness O! Glazing Moon! Make haste and tell How profound is hatred, beneath this breast Where, drenched in love, a heart did dwell Upon you, My heart, I swear, I proclaim Sha'n't ever bleed in eye, sha'n't ever take his name. Lo! Behold! Last thing, I wish to confess If I say unto you, shall I be relieved For you know me, my heart at best If I say unto you, shall I be believed No matter how high may hatred soar I own, my love shall weigh ever more!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/11/2009 11:59:00 AM
:):) .... Kadeecheeumma Pal ..... Keep those rhymes rolling ......
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Date: 12/3/2009 12:33:00 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Pallavi. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 1:42:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured Pallavi >> James
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Date: 11/30/2009 6:14:00 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 9/19/2009 9:13:00 AM
"Sorrow, the sacrifice, you did witness O! Glazing Moon! Make haste and tell How profound is hatred, beneath this breast Where, drenched in love, a heart did dwell" just marvelous lines Shakespeare would steal them! Light & Love
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Date: 7/27/2009 2:48:00 PM
Good poetry.
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Date: 6/19/2009 8:16:00 AM
I love This one-->To My favs=)
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Date: 6/19/2009 7:05:00 AM
nice poem
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Date: 6/19/2009 6:55:00 AM
up to you! no comments on the same!
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Date: 6/19/2009 6:49:00 AM
I've this poem... anyway, I have some of your poems... do you want me to send via mailsoup?? you can have them back....
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Date: 6/19/2009 6:46:00 AM
I suggest, come with your real name... if you have no issues... instead of poems by "moon of blues' keep by "Pallavi Khera"... anyway, up to you....
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