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A Night Talk

A Night talk

beautiful Mood
embraced the silence

my paradise
threw a talk

when humans 
slept
and dreamt

weakness
missed fondling

verge liver lips
invited 
a night talk 

confusions
apprehensions
disappointments

dangling wistfully
waiting shelter
bolster

lashes day
waiting for arms of love
to maintained

a talk
more closely
concentrated over night

my timeless hope
you dissolve
my dusty soul

a cradle
i need
with peaceful wings

waiting you there
for another night talk
destiny to new destinations

~(c) sukmawati Komala ~
28 April 2013

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/2/2014 7:25:00 AM

While others sleep you wander in your own fantasy, relishing the silence around you. Lovely poem, Sukmawati. // paul

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 4/9/2013 6:03:00 PM

bittersweet and lovely....I especially like the line "a cradle i need with peaceful wings....

Jeremy Martin

Date: 4/7/2013 2:42:00 PM

This poem is beautiful. I like how each stanza has a whispering, musing quality..it's very dreamy and free-floating but comes together so well.

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/3/2013 10:16:00 AM

this is amazing poetry, sukmawati, you sure take destiny to my destination... so thought provoking, so precious is your poetry....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/31/2013 2:34:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your very creative work..Thanks for stopping by..Your visit was appreciated..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2013 8:27:00 AM

This is an interesting way to describe a night talk. It sounds as if you are waiting to talk to an angel! I have been having insomnia lately and just end up talking with myself! It's Easter here in the US this morning. Does anyone celebrate it where you are? In case it's true, I will tell you Happy Easter!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/31/2013 5:28:00 AM

.... you have to sleep at night, dear Sukmawati .... - A beautiful poem! - Have a nice day, hope the sun will shine on you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) :)