A Night Sky

Universe goes calm
With the sunset,
That's twilight of
Reddish yellow sky,
All longings
Reaching to rest.

Sky disappears
Into darkness,
Eyes go blind 
Looking into zero,
That's the hue of
A Night sky.

Awaits moon and stars 
To prove its
Very being,
Lustrous bodies
Add glitter to
The Night sky.

A perfect song
That twinkles,
Melodious to heart
With eyes winkles,
Packed beautitude,
A Night sky !






Written by Dr. Upma A. Sharma
on 28/3/14
For the contest ' A night sky'
By Nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Deschler Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 6:38 PM
I love how you described the stars as being like glitter in a night sky. Very beautiful imagery in this poem. A great write, Dr. Upma! Congratulations on your win!
Kos Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 2:34 PM
Congratulations on this well-deserved win, Dr! Very nice imagery. I envision the sky disappearing above my head whilst moons & stars glisten nighly.
A. Sharma Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 5:31 AM
Thanks a lot for ur valuable comments Ivo..../upma/
Callus Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 2:20 PM
Lovely night sky Dr. Upma. worthy of this win. congrats. // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 5:31 AM
feeling happy that u liked .... thanks Paul /upma/
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April 21, 2014 at 9:33 PM
Dr Umpa, Congratulations, --Enjoyed your awesome win. Thank you so much for the support... Always & forever *Linda
A. Sharma Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 5:32 AM
Thanks Linda,,,for the like n for ur wishes,,,/upma/
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 9:15 PM
I love the part: To prove its very being. How cool!! Great entry for that contest.
A. Sharma Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 5:33 AM
Thanks Andrea for ur lovely comments,,/upma/
Torres Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 12:36 PM
a perfect canvass of a night sky--- this is great poem, Upma!! good luck in the contest--- ^__^
A. Sharma Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 5:34 AM
happy that u liked n a win wid ur kind wishes Aiyah,,,/upma/
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