A Night On the Town

A Night On The Town

While searching for a book, one that I hadn’t yet read
I stumbled upon a critter and this is what he said:

Although the library is quite cozy and nice;
Could you fancy a night out for the right price?

Howsabout we meet by the bibliotheca shrub?
A groundhog as I adores a good Punxsy pub.

Grab your coat and throw on your hat.
I’m ready to have a friendly chat.

I looked him in the eye and asked him his name
With delight, he said, 

“You’re unaware of my fame.

My friends call me Phil, so I suppose you should too
Let’s blow this joint”

And away we flew

We wandered the streets of this charming town
Visiting shops and pubs, up the street and down

We feasted on grub and guzzled much drink
Then, Phil looked at me with a very hard think

“My friend, it’s been fun but it’s three in the morning.”

And he tottered down the street without any warning

I watched as he burrowed under the library steps
Down on my knees and behind him I crept

His words fell on my ears as he waddled out of sight

 “My friend, it’s time for you to go as the sun soon brings light.

You see, I don’t mean to complicate.
But in the morning, I must prognosticate.

Meet me again: fight your way through the mob.
That tree over there; in Gobblers knob.

In just a few hours, at the light of the day;
Meet me again; and don’t delay.”

I did just that; I waited on the lawn
When Phil came out with a stretch and a yawn

With a wink and a smile, his eyes met me with regard
Then a man handed me a note.  His name was Gerard.

“This note is from Phil.  Don’t tell anyone he can talk, or find you I will.”

I took the note from this cryptic subversive
And found it to be written in splendid cursive

"Thank you for the night, full of libations and cheer
Let’s do it all again.  Meet me same time next year."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/15/2015 10:11:00 AM
A wonderful win, Maureen.....SKAT
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Date: 2/5/2015 10:28:00 PM
Wonderful write, Maureen, a 7 and congratulations on your win. Blessings Eve
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Date: 2/5/2015 8:43:00 PM
Congrats on the win! This was a fun read and quite a story.
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Date: 2/3/2015 5:37:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Maureen - enjoyed your clever rhyme:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/3/2015 4:18:00 PM
Maureen, nice job on the contest. The line that got me was: "Phil looked at me with a very hard think". Thanks for entering, hope you had fun with it.
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Date: 1/30/2015 2:18:00 PM
I liked this night in the town with its beautiful rhymea,rhytm and associative feelingsCongrat.
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Date: 1/25/2015 12:51:00 AM
Maureen, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/24/2015 6:17:00 AM
Maureen, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/22/2015 5:04:00 AM
- Hey Maureen, nice to read your first poem - Welcome to P - Soup !! - Hope to read many more poems from you in the future - // Anne-Lise :)
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