A Night of Terror

Something evil this way comes
Glowing eyes and toothy gums
Vile stench like that of death
Flows aloft on every breath

Blackened shadow in the night
Only shows itself for fright
Sinister in every way
Makes people hide and people pray

Terror fills the coldest heart
Breaking rational apart
In the corner cowering
From what this unknown thing might bring

I close my eyes with hands on face
My pulse is twice its normal pace
I wait to find what next may come
Then wake to find it all undone

With open eyes and sunshines beam
I see that it was all a dream
But still I fear what's next to come
When night is here and day is done


For Francine Roberts contest "In Dreams"

Rockman

9/26/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Anglesey Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 5:58 PM
A very eerie glimpse of frightful thoughts and gloom. Well done
Dunn Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 2:41 PM
Very good write it chills the night with frieght but at dawns light remember their is the warmth of the sun's everlasting rays. great job on this write.
Cavanaugh Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 2:05 AM
A very enjoyable read. Great job.
Guzzi Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 2:26 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 11:49 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "In Dreams" contest Rockman. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 10:56 AM
A great writing couplet style. A great poem and win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Grisetti Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 9:16 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem - a fantastic nightmare to be avoided, except on paper.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 9:12 AM
CONGRATS ROCKMAN ON A FANTASTIC WRITE AND WIN IN DREAMS LUV .. EXCEPTIONAL ..
Nutter Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 6:15 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's dream contest.
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October 7, 2012 at 9:07 PM
Rockman, a wonderful win in Francine Roberts, "In dream" contest. Enjoyed all her winners, love PD
Pettit Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 5:34 PM
Reads like a good description of my sixth grade teacher. Congratulations on your win.
Roberts Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 1:12 PM
great job Randy, congrats on your win
Liwayway Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 1:09 PM
congrats on you win friend Rockman :)
Bauer Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 6:37 PM
nice one! you've really conveyed that feeling of terror very well.
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