A Nice Guy

With a deadly combination of smooth and reasonable, he was a nice guy He spoke low with a drawl I slowed down to hear his every word, he was a nice guy He came like the wind that threatened to unsettle my soul, he was a nice guy He had a uneasy relationship with wealth He wanted to be effective far more than he wanted to be rich, he was a nice guy A strange mix of everything male, yet a softness only love can see, he was a nice guy. One day he asked me if he could kiss me I leaned in and everything felt clear. He was intriguing and secure, he was a nice guy He never gave importance to material things Largely into books, providing ballast for his mind. For thirty-five years I’ve known him, he is a nice guy He’s my husband, still a nice guy. 26.09.2020

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/28/2020 8:41:00 PM

Lovely tribute, Carol. Sounds like a wonderful partner for marriage. Blessings, Gershon

Carol Mitra
Date: 9/28/2020 9:46:00 PM

Thank you Gershon.....Yes I am blessed indeed he is :)

John Watt

Date: 9/28/2020 12:52:00 AM

Fun coincidence: my wife and I have been married 35 years (Dec '84). And she still thinks I'm a nice guy! Great write for your hubby ~ John

John Watt
Date: 9/29/2020 12:43:00 PM

Oh, I misread it the first time. I see now that you have known each other for 35 years... still, that's a long time to be together and still be in love. Hats off to you both!

Carol Mitra
Date: 9/28/2020 1:00:00 AM

We are married for 33 years John and know each other for 35 years....yes we wives know when we have a nice guy beside us....so nice to know...Take good care of each other :)

Elaine George

Date: 9/26/2020 7:28:00 PM

Yes! He definitely sounds like a nice guy. Many congrats on your win, Carol.

Carol Mitra
Date: 9/26/2020 8:39:00 PM

Thanks Elaine....much appreciated :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/26/2020 5:11:00 AM

- Many years of love, Carol ... lovely written :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Mitra
Date: 9/26/2020 6:21:00 AM

Thanks dear Anne-Lise...you too have an awesome weekend.:)