A New Years Promise



A new sunrise, a new beginning

Now, is the time to keep the promises
Everything in my life changing
Weakness withers as courage rises

Years, months, days of endless crying
Each glistening tear fades
A ***** feeling
Relax, Lord, my weary muscles
Stop the wind and the roaring

Past the safety of lies
Rocking, soothed in storytelling
O, mere scraps, odds and ends of fantasies
Misty, pieces of truth, falling
I, the weaving spider cries
Stop, time to start the living
End the weeping before life fades
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January 7, 2013


Poetry/Acrostic/A New Years Promise
Copyright Protected, ID 01-447-670-07
All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France


Written for the Standard contest, 
New Years Acrostic, Judged 01/2013

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 22, 2013 at 5:54 PM
Constance, I like what I read, ~SKAT
Guzzi Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 3:28 PM
I really hope so Constance..I pray for you it is so. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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January 14, 2013 at 10:03 AM
Congrats on your great win..Enjoyed reading of your hope for the New Year..Sara
Roberts Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 9:55 PM
congrats Constance on your win in my contest....p.s. I miss your challenging creative contests
A   Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 6:44 PM
Constance, a good and well done acrostic. Congratulations with your winning poem. In Francine's ' "New Year's acrostic" contest. Take Care~ PD
Haick Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 4:02 PM
Congratulations on your Honorable Mention, Constance! Love, Annalise
Sivey Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 2:20 PM
This is a very powerful and intriguing write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this harmonious and wondrous poem this afternoon! What a delightful and enlightening piece, very glorious write, Great Work!!
Haick Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 1:18 PM
Heart touching write, Constance...Best wishes for the contest and for the new year! Love, Annalise
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January 7, 2013 at 11:49 AM
New year with new goals ..... a really good poem Constance. - Luck in contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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January 7, 2013 at 10:49 AM
A great new year rise. Thanks for sharing. Wish you the best in all your future endeavors....good luck, .... Love, Mehnaz
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