A New Season Arrives

a new season arrives tiny herald ceased magic took place once again now the trees relax

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/1/2017 8:42:00 PM

Indeed ....beautiful....

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/1/2017 9:10:00 PM

Welcome to my home. Thank you of reading and commenting

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/1/2017 9:20:00 AM

Thank you Victor. The fall winds have already arrived here. A bit early but seasons have their own agenda.

Niall Fulham

Date: 9/1/2017 9:09:00 AM

Hi Patricia , put together very clever my friend , most enjoyable Haiku ::)))) hugs

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/1/2017 9:13:00 AM

Thank you Niall. Seems late nights are conducive to short poems (Haiku)

Pipping Stars

Date: 9/1/2017 6:21:00 AM

leaves blown from atop roofs in the stilness breath is so much fresher how far we have traveled from misery our eyes resting on sound of rustle ing leaves hearing only the scent of golden autom leafs ... .. . your your made us them words happen ... nice moodn ...

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/1/2017 9:16:00 AM

Timothy I appreciate your poetic reply. It is nice to know what thoughts are begun by a poem. Thank you

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/1/2017 4:26:00 AM

This is a nice Haiku. I have to admit, I don't know much about Haikus, but they seem to be pretty. Russell wants me to type for him, "This is a fantastic Haiku, Patricia. You have written an amazing and clever poem. This is a very well thought out poem, you have here a masterful piece. I am impressed by your skillfulness with writing this incredible poem my friend. Such a beautiful write. Great work." Awesome! Emma :)

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/1/2017 9:22:00 AM

Thank you Russell take care. Emma keep him in check men are so impossible when ill.

White Wolf

Date: 9/1/2017 1:53:00 AM

Obviously, you are on the other side of the globe to me! Great haiku, Patricia

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/1/2017 2:01:00 AM

I am in central Ontario. Seasons come as they please in my belief. They tell us of their comings and goings if we just stop and look and listen.. We are the silly people who thought such phenomena could begiven dates by which to live. lol Thank you for your visit to my world.