A New Life

A
Baby is born, many
Cheers all around.
Daddy is smiling 
Everyone is happy now.
For the dangers are over,
Got a lovely baby girl
Her name we don't know
I think it might be. Hope.
Just because theirs was running low.
Kisses are exchanged 
Love will flow.
Mum is so tired,
Nearly a day in labour.
Oh so relieved now
Parents at last. From now on 
Quality of life will grow.
Rest is now needed
So off home we all go.
Tomorrow is a new day
Until then we will sleep a 
Very happy family that
Welcomed the baby girl.
X. Kisses goodbye
Years of happiness ahead with
Zeta  - a new life



Dated 15 August 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/9/2014 2:25:00 PM
Seren, this is a nice example of an abecedarian poem. Amazingly done. Love Linda
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/10/2014 12:48:00 AM
thank you Linda ...Seren
Date: 9/8/2014 1:56:00 PM
a lovely imaginative pen Seren the use of only one letter in your first line cost you points. congrats on 2nd place ty for your support hugs
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Date: 9/10/2014 12:49:00 AM
I will remember that in future thx Shadow....Seren
Date: 9/8/2014 5:12:00 AM
Very cleverly penned poem, Seren. congrats
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Date: 9/10/2014 12:49:00 AM
Thank you Ram ...Seren
Date: 9/7/2014 5:20:00 PM
What an upbeat poem. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/10/2014 12:49:00 AM
Thank you Joyce ...Seren
Date: 9/7/2014 2:40:00 PM
Such a cute Abecedarian Seren . Congratulations on your win and the baby.
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Date: 9/10/2014 12:50:00 AM
Thanks Brenda ....Seren
Date: 9/7/2014 2:05:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Seren:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/10/2014 12:51:00 AM
Hi Jan thanks for dropping back...Seren
Date: 8/17/2014 7:53:00 PM
Nicely written Seren...this can't be easy
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/18/2014 7:24:00 PM
Thank you David ....Seren
Date: 8/16/2014 9:59:00 PM
gosh what a great job you did with this form. Inspires me to want to try it!
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Date: 8/18/2014 7:25:00 PM
Thank you. Andrea..hope you try it .....Seren
Date: 8/16/2014 8:01:00 AM
How remarkable is this story..My niece was born at 1 lb 1 oz (.48 kg)...and now is just about to turn 17. many miracles do happen...I love poems about babies and children...hugs Tim
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Date: 9/10/2014 12:51:00 AM
Of course they do Tim, just have to believe....Seren
Date: 8/16/2014 7:05:00 AM
Gosh i must have a try this is awesome Seren:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/18/2014 7:26:00 PM
Thanks Jan .... Seren
Date: 8/16/2014 4:25:00 AM
Exceptional and brilliant Seren is ur write! hv a great day!
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