A New Life

A
Baby is born, many
Cheers all around.
Daddy is smiling 
Everyone is happy now.
For the dangers are over,
Got a lovely baby girl
Her name we don't know
I think it might be. Hope.
Just because theirs was running low.
Kisses are exchanged 
Love will flow.
Mum is so tired,
Nearly a day in labour.
Oh so relieved now
Parents at last. From now on 
Quality of life will grow.
Rest is now needed
So off home we all go.
Tomorrow is a new day
Until then we will sleep a 
Very happy family that
Welcomed the baby girl.
X. Kisses goodbye
Years of happiness ahead with
Zeta  - a new life



Dated 15 August 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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September 9, 2014 at 2:25 PM
Seren, this is a nice example of an abecedarian poem. Amazingly done. Love Linda
Roberts Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 12:48 AM
thank you Linda ...Seren
Hamilton Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 1:56 PM
a lovely imaginative pen Seren the use of only one letter in your first line cost you points. congrats on 2nd place ty for your support hugs
Roberts Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 12:49 AM
I will remember that in future thx Shadow....Seren
Mehta Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 5:12 AM
Very cleverly penned poem, Seren. congrats
Roberts Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 12:49 AM
Thank you Ram ...Seren
Johnson Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 5:20 PM
What an upbeat poem. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 12:49 AM
Thank you Joyce ...Seren
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September 7, 2014 at 2:40 PM
Such a cute Abecedarian Seren . Congratulations on your win and the baby.
Roberts Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 12:50 AM
Thanks Brenda ....Seren
Allison Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 2:05 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Seren:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Roberts Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 12:51 AM
Hi Jan thanks for dropping back...Seren
Mohn Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 7:53 PM
Nicely written Seren...this can't be easy
Roberts Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 7:24 PM
Thank you David ....Seren
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 9:59 PM
gosh what a great job you did with this form. Inspires me to want to try it!
Roberts Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 7:25 PM
Thank you. Andrea..hope you try it .....Seren
Smith Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 8:01 AM
How remarkable is this story..My niece was born at 1 lb 1 oz (.48 kg)...and now is just about to turn 17. many miracles do happen...I love poems about babies and children...hugs Tim
Roberts Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 12:51 AM
Of course they do Tim, just have to believe....Seren
Allison Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 7:05 AM
Gosh i must have a try this is awesome Seren:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
Roberts Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 7:26 PM
Thanks Jan .... Seren
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August 16, 2014 at 4:25 AM
Exceptional and brilliant Seren is ur write! hv a great day!
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