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A New Life

A Baby is born, many Cheers all around. Daddy is smiling Everyone is happy now. For the dangers are over, Got a lovely baby girl Her name we don't know I think it might be. Hope. Just because theirs was running low. Kisses are exchanged Love will flow. Mum is so tired, Nearly a day in labour. Oh so relieved now Parents at last. From now on Quality of life will grow. Rest is now needed So off home we all go. Tomorrow is a new day Until then we will sleep a Very happy family that Welcomed the baby girl. X. Kisses goodbye Years of happiness ahead with Zeta - a new life Dated 15 August 2014

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/9/2014 2:25:00 PM

Seren, this is a nice example of an abecedarian poem. Amazingly done. Love Linda

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/10/2014 12:48:00 AM

thank you Linda ...Seren

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/8/2014 1:56:00 PM

a lovely imaginative pen Seren the use of only one letter in your first line cost you points. congrats on 2nd place ty for your support hugs

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/10/2014 12:49:00 AM

I will remember that in future thx Shadow....Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/8/2014 5:12:00 AM

Very cleverly penned poem, Seren. congrats

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/10/2014 12:49:00 AM

Thank you Ram ...Seren

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/7/2014 5:20:00 PM

What an upbeat poem. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/10/2014 12:49:00 AM

Thank you Joyce ...Seren

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/7/2014 2:40:00 PM

Such a cute Abecedarian Seren . Congratulations on your win and the baby.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/10/2014 12:50:00 AM

Thanks Brenda ....Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 9/7/2014 2:05:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Seren:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/10/2014 12:51:00 AM

Hi Jan thanks for dropping back...Seren

David Mohn

Date: 8/17/2014 7:53:00 PM

Nicely written Seren...this can't be easy

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/18/2014 7:24:00 PM

Thank you David ....Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2014 9:59:00 PM

gosh what a great job you did with this form. Inspires me to want to try it!

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/18/2014 7:25:00 PM

Thank you. Andrea..hope you try it .....Seren

Tim Smith

Date: 8/16/2014 8:01:00 AM

How remarkable is this story..My niece was born at 1 lb 1 oz (.48 kg)...and now is just about to turn 17. many miracles do happen...I love poems about babies and children...hugs Tim

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/10/2014 12:51:00 AM

Of course they do Tim, just have to believe....Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 8/16/2014 7:05:00 AM

Gosh i must have a try this is awesome Seren:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/18/2014 7:26:00 PM

Thanks Jan .... Seren

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/16/2014 4:25:00 AM

Exceptional and brilliant Seren is ur write! hv a great day!