A New Journey

Nimbus clouds drifted over me from the sinking horizon
Etched on these I saw the image of my marooned mind
Wandering  forlorn in the seamless smoky sky of sorrow.

Broken dreams drizzled from the melting morose clouds
Enmeshing me with the latent lattice of gripping gloom
Gliding on the surging cascade of agony inundating the eyes   
In swirling storm of devastating despair I searched for a trail.
Nascent dawn ascended with the rising sun promising me
New beginning  as I found fervent hues flash on your face
Inspiring me to return from the edge of desolate wasteland
Never to stray away from the verge of the verdant meadow.
Gleefully I began a new journey on the garden path with you
Saw in your eyes all my departed dreams return one by one.

January 30, 2021
Contest : New Beginnings
Sponsor : John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 6:53 AM
Subimal, Congrats on your first-place win. Very deserving and beautiful
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 10:11 AM
Subimal, your poem is incredibly beautiful! I was emotionally moved by your words. Truly deserving of your First placement my friend. Congratulations! I am Faving this gorgeous poem! Blessings xxoo
Daniel Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 1:09 AM
A lovely poem, Subimal, congrats on your top win:)
La France Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 4:05 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in John's New Beginnings contest with this excellent poem, well done _Constance
Hamilton Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 10:51 AM
I always love your writing Subimal, this is a special write, congrats on a great win!
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