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A New Journey

Nimbus clouds drifted over me from the sinking horizon Etched on these I saw the image of my marooned mind Wandering forlorn in the seamless smoky sky of sorrow. Broken dreams drizzled from the melting morose clouds Enmeshing me with the latent lattice of gripping gloom Gliding on the surging cascade of agony inundating the eyes In swirling storm of devastating despair I searched for a trail. Nascent dawn ascended with the rising sun promising me New beginning as I found fervent hues flash on your face Inspiring me to return from the edge of desolate wasteland Never to stray away from the verge of the verdant meadow. Gleefully I began a new journey on the garden path with you Saw in your eyes all my departed dreams return one by one. January 30, 2021 Contest : New Beginnings Sponsor : John Hamilton

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Date: 2/20/2021 6:53:00 AM
Subimal, Congrats on your first-place win. Very deserving and beautiful
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Date: 2/9/2021 10:11:00 AM
Subimal, your poem is incredibly beautiful! I was emotionally moved by your words. Truly deserving of your First placement my friend. Congratulations! I am Faving this gorgeous poem! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 2/7/2021 1:09:00 AM
A lovely poem, Subimal, congrats on your top win:)
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Date: 2/5/2021 4:05:00 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in John's New Beginnings contest with this excellent poem, well done _Constance
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Date: 2/5/2021 10:51:00 AM
I always love your writing Subimal, this is a special write, congrats on a great win!
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