A New Home Concluded

In Heaven
You're in a better home. 
There are no vicious attacks there 
but beautiful angels sing.

Assured by the florist.
Roses have no thorns,
sorrow is always banished,
discomfort exists not more.
The weather is always mild
and butterflies abound,
flowers produce perfume,
pollen clogs no lungs.

Down here the thunder rumbles
the storm distorts the roads.
Birds hide in their wobbly nests,
fog oppresses our chests.
Still we leave some flowers
beside your cold memorial stone.
Then we tramp back home 
across the snowy moor.
Sad but consoled.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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George Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 2:25 AM
When we face the storms of life, we are consoled by the thoughts of a land where love abounds and happiness and beauty never dim. Beautiful poem. dear Victor. The concluding lines choke my throat !
Roper Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 5:54 AM
A perfect heaven, with earth our strife. Blessing dear friend
Buehler Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 5:00 PM
Your evocative and perfect conclusion inspires happy feelings, Victor. A pleasure toi read. :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 4:27 PM
A fabulous conclusion, dear poet
Rose  Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 3:57 PM
There is so much artistry in your words Victor, one ay you will dance with her inside a garden full of flowers, and there will be no more pain, only joy, until then, close your eyes and remember how it was :)
Allison Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 12:39 PM
Such a heartfelt piece Victor, thanks for sharing your thoughts:-) hugs jan xx
One Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 12:23 PM
IF only everyone could get into heaven.. how lovely it would be.. peace and harmony..
Poet Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 10:30 AM
Victor, what an emotional ride! A perfect description was given of the heavenly and terrestrial kingdoms.
Pandit Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 7:19 AM
Emotive journey, Victor. Perfect described the realms of heaven and earth.
Gentile Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 7:18 AM
Victor, such a beautiful and peaceful depiction you have created with your thoughts of Heaven! Just a lovely write! Happy Thursday!
May Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 6:41 AM
A heartfelt verse, best wishes
Rodrigues Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 5:15 AM
Such feeling conveyed in your poetic lines! A fave, Victor!
Andresen Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 2:56 AM
- A place in heaven where all flowers grow ... lovely written, Victor :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 2:46 AM
It's always so sad for those that are left behind Victor, the only consolation we have is that they are at peace. Tom
Sharma  Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 1:45 AM
Oh my, this is such a deep and heartfelt poem dear Victor.. True, heaven is the most beautiful and final home that can give solace to our souls.. Where there are no conspiracies or vicious attacks.. And every heart lives in peace, within the embrace of Almighty. But those, who are left behind, live with a perpetual ache and a grief that lives in us forever..That last line really reflects how loss of loved ones brings tears but also, their memories console us in some way..A FAV this is, so moving
M  Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 1:41 AM
Sounds lovely Victor! Nice poem though sad ending….Debx
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