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A New Day Comes To Be

~ A champagne sky peeks through the mist This weary morning lightly kissed With thoughts of you my heart has missed A new day comes to be As clouds now fade to scenes of blue Reflecting in the morning dew My eyes still long that wondrous view When you are who I see ~

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/10/2019 1:53:00 PM

O, that the world would wake up to this every morning, Chris! Preciously penned. Peace and joy, Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2019 2:36:00 PM

Thanks so much my friend.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/10/2019 12:04:00 PM

Ahhh champagne skies are always a great start to my day!;) beautifully written Chris!;)

Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2019 2:36:00 PM

Thank you so much Brenda.

John Hamilton

Date: 10/10/2019 11:35:00 AM

A lovely way to start the day reading you Chris, I always enjoy your writing, cheerful or mournful it doesn't matter, your mastery of the vocab to reflect emotions is unsurpassed

Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2019 12:04:00 PM

You comments always humble me my friend. I just write what I see and feel. I am so thankful you enjoy my work.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/10/2019 10:54:00 AM

A lovely champagne sky and romantic love...popping the cork! Have a great day!

Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2019 11:01:00 AM

Thank you so very much Kim. I hope you have a great day too.

Hello There

Date: 10/10/2019 10:52:00 AM

An enchanting morning write, my friend. Though uplifting, even charming, there is still that sweet ache of longing... A touching piece for sure ~ nicely written :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2019 10:59:00 AM

Thank you my friend. I suppose that longing will always be there in some form or fashion. It is a part of me. I appreciate your visit and kind words.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 10/10/2019 10:52:00 AM

This is so lovely. I have noticed champagne skies (I think "dusty" would be a true word here in West Texas) and a clearing day blue, the melancholy disappearing.

Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2019 10:55:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend. Champagne sky was my first thought when I glanced at my South Texas sky this morning.

Dm Babbit

Date: 10/10/2019 9:57:00 AM

Beautiful imagery.

Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2019 10:05:00 AM

Thank you so much DM. I appreciate your kind words.

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/10/2019 8:59:00 AM

another gorgeous poem, your words just cascade down with the prismatic brilliance of a rainbow....so soft but so beautiful! love this my friend :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2019 10:05:00 AM

Good morning my friend. I am happy you stopped by. It was a bit hazy here this morning but once the clouds started to dissipate the brilliance of the day came through. I am thrilled you enjoyed this

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/10/2019 8:03:00 AM

This pulled me right in with the beginning champagne sky! So soft and peaceful to read Chris. Have a nice day :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/10/2019 10:03:00 AM

I hope you have a nice day as well my friend. It will be a hot one here today but hopefully by the weekend we will get a break from the heat.