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A New Day Awakens


The light of day breaks
Through the misty morning dawn
Sunrise beckons us

naturehaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2011 10:18:00 PM

very nice, james and congrat on having two poems in the finals!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/9/2011 11:16:00 AM

Congratulations James, on your poetry X2making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The very best to you in the finals. Love Carol

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/7/2011 10:37:00 AM

best wishes on your success here James.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 6:19:00 PM

Congrats James on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv...

Date: 1/16/2011 1:40:00 PM

Nice use of imagery! Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/13/2011 3:26:00 PM

No wonder this haiku was featured this week. It has to be one of the best I've ever seen anywhere.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/13/2011 9:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week James. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 1/12/2011 5:11:00 PM

Congrats James, on your haiku being featured. Vince

Daver Austin

Date: 1/12/2011 1:37:00 PM

Good image - nice and warm. Congrats on the selection. Dave

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 1/9/2011 8:17:00 PM

a well written haiku. beautiful imagery. congrats on being featured this week! --Madison

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/9/2011 6:25:00 PM

Congrats James on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all today with luv...

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/1/2010 8:04:00 AM

Love the images James ~ Wilma

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 8/1/2010 5:02:00 AM

awesome haiku. .

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/31/2010 10:48:00 AM

beautiful, James

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 7/30/2010 5:16:00 PM

Nice haiku James, can be taken literally or figuratively...the start of a new day, or the start of a new life. Whichever it is, that sunrise is welcome ~ Sharon :)