A New Day

A New Day

Yesterday we played in the sun
Building sand castles at the beach
With the waves of destiny guiding,
guiding our steps. We pause.
We look into each other's eyes,
then out into the horizon, and 
our eyes moisten at the treadmill
of life we're on..."we need to
change, babe"...as if the voices
and eyes in the ocean awakened.
We fall back into each others arms,
as the clouds in the sky scatter,
giving us the stage. I whisper.
She returns her answer with a
kiss, as her fingers squeeze my
nose. Her way of telling me she
knows, too. 

3/16/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Godwin Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 4:18 PM
I don't think I've ever called a poem 'precious' before, but to me this writing is just that. Maybe it's the nose thing. I could feel and see this. Most enjoyable! Hugs ... CayCay
Pachecho Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 8:30 PM
thank you for the compliments and well wishes+
Andresen Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 2:53 PM
- One fine day ... enjoy the sun and love - Great poem, Connie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pachecho Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 8:30 PM
thank you for the compliments and well wishes
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