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A New Day

so here i am, pretty much over the pain now just trying not to go insane cant help it but i feel emotionally drained. a bad start to the week i am lost, everything i want to seek loving him has made me weak i lay awake in bed, hard to sleep my feelings are running way to deep 2 wrongs dont make a right, but i want to creep my feelings for him i dont want to keep he touched me last night the sex amazing but it just aint right i want to erase him from my sight my future with him aint looking to bright so i am left to sort out all the emotions still giving him all my devotion but his love is like a curse, and i was given that potion now i am just going through the motions.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2016 1:58:00 AM

Laendra Booker, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry XOX ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 8/19/2015 12:16:00 AM

Interesting poem, Laendra, I like this very much SKAT

Crystal Wilkins

Date: 5/28/2011 9:08:00 AM

Brilliant write the damage a broken relationship can cause is always draining. Keep up the good writes!

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Date: 4/8/2011 4:41:00 PM

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Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/4/2011 8:26:00 AM

i'm curious about why you went from a 3 line stanza to a 4 ? Also, some of your sentences are a little awkward like "my feelings for him I don't want to keep." In addition, I'm not sure what you mean by "but i want to creep" and I don't understand if his is love a curse or a potion? They seem contradictory to me. However, I like the line "loving him has made me weak" I thought it was the most powerful line in your poem.