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A New Day

It was far later than dawn Even past those pastel morns Sun being up and light bright Reveal all__no shadows__ The roosters had crowed before Now were almost silent__still Birds had quieted__just rare chirp In distance__ machinery noise As I got comfortable Noticed herbs looked wilted__ drooped Checked to see if dry but not They are__ totally potbound Life__how many people are Stuck__complacent__not growing Soon will die from starvation Just live a boring__stuck life Just one change__out of the rut Going a different route___walk Take a camera along One change__life becomes new__ grand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/6/2010 8:27:00 AM
Great Easter advice Sara
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Date: 4/2/2010 8:56:00 PM
truth be told Sara... and u did .. so enjoyed your creative write tonight..luv.. and happy Easter celebration to u and yours..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/2/2010 4:01:00 PM
its sometimes sad, when people grow, but they aren't really "growing" because they can't find the things that fit them most, or they are just bored with their lives.not knowing who they are. some go out to seek change though, great meaning. i like it, and i hope you have a great Easter with your family and friends as well Mrs.Poet.lol.have a wonderful day -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/2/2010 3:39:00 PM
Some good advice here. Thanks for your comments. I hope things are going well with you and yours. Happy Easter, Joyce
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Date: 4/2/2010 2:30:00 PM
so very true!
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Date: 4/2/2010 2:14:00 PM
Super Sara enjoyed this read nice to goto sleep on thanks Daniel
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