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A New Day

Light breaks through the clouds Age old rocks await the warmth Creatures awaken.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 2/20/2010 6:36:00 PM
Hey, this was really nice. Is it for the current contest or was it that last one? I can't even keep truak GEEEEZ
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Date: 2/20/2010 9:23:00 AM
You have created quite a beautiful image, Joyce. Daybreak always lifts my heart, just as your poem does. Outstanding haiku! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/19/2010 4:20:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku Joyce...enjoyed...good luck if in the contest...Marty
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