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A New Bud

a new bud stretches to the sun crimson beetle
1-11-2022 HAIKU CONTEST inspired by BASHO only Damned I-Be

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Date: 1/25/2022 3:22:00 PM
Superb contrast in your haiku, from buds opening to the crimson beetle settling in. Loved it. Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 1/7/2022 4:28:00 PM
wow best haiku I saw today!!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/11/2022 2:15:00 PM
Many thanks.
Date: 1/4/2022 7:21:00 PM
I see a beetle on a budding flower, stretching in the sunlight. This is a great poem! :)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/11/2022 2:16:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 1/4/2022 4:17:00 PM
A lovely picture, enjoyed ~ Debra
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/11/2022 2:16:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 1/4/2022 11:02:00 AM
great imagery, pretty crimson beetle had to look it up. Bless you M.L.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/11/2022 2:17:00 PM
The lovely lady bug.
Date: 1/3/2022 7:27:00 PM
Very vivid and lovely, M.L. :)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/11/2022 2:17:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 1/3/2022 6:01:00 PM
This haiku is certainly 'thought-evoking.' Nicely done M.L!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/11/2022 2:16:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks.
Date: 1/3/2022 12:42:00 PM
- A gem, M.L. :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/11/2022 2:16:00 PM
Thank you.