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A New Bud

a new bud stretches to the sun crimson beetle 1-11-2022 HAIKU CONTEST inspired by BASHO only Damned I-Be

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/25/2022 3:22:00 PM

Superb contrast in your haiku, from buds opening to the crimson beetle settling in. Loved it. Congratulations! Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2022 4:28:00 PM

wow best haiku I saw today!!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/11/2022 2:15:00 PM

Many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/4/2022 7:21:00 PM

I see a beetle on a budding flower, stretching in the sunlight. This is a great poem! :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/11/2022 2:16:00 PM

Thank you.

Debra L Brown

Date: 1/4/2022 4:17:00 PM

A lovely picture, enjoyed ~ Debra

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/11/2022 2:16:00 PM

Thank you.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/4/2022 11:02:00 AM

great imagery, pretty crimson beetle had to look it up. Bless you M.L.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/11/2022 2:17:00 PM

The lovely lady bug.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/3/2022 7:27:00 PM

Very vivid and lovely, M.L. :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/11/2022 2:17:00 PM

Thank you.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/3/2022 6:01:00 PM

This haiku is certainly 'thought-evoking.' Nicely done M.L!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/11/2022 2:16:00 PM

I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/3/2022 12:42:00 PM

- A gem, M.L. :) - // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/11/2022 2:16:00 PM

Thank you.