A New Bud

a new bud
stretches to the sun
crimson beetle


1-11-2022
HAIKU CONTEST inspired by BASHO only
 Damned I-Be

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Brian Sambourne

January 25, 2022 at 3:22 PM

Superb contrast in your haiku, from buds opening to the crimson beetle settling in. Loved it. Congratulations! Brian

Andrea Dietrich

January 7, 2022 at 4:28 PM

wow best haiku I saw today!!

M. L. Kiser

January 11, 2022 at 2:15 PM

Many thanks.

Heidi Sands

January 4, 2022 at 7:21 PM

I see a beetle on a budding flower, stretching in the sunlight. This is a great poem! :)

M. L. Kiser

January 11, 2022 at 2:16 PM

Thank you.

Debra L Brown

January 4, 2022 at 4:17 PM

A lovely picture, enjoyed ~ Debra

M. L. Kiser

January 11, 2022 at 2:16 PM

Thank you.

Eve Roper

January 4, 2022 at 11:02 AM

great imagery, pretty crimson beetle had to look it up. Bless you M.L.

M. L. Kiser

January 11, 2022 at 2:17 PM

The lovely lady bug.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 3, 2022 at 7:27 PM

Very vivid and lovely, M.L. :)

M. L. Kiser

January 11, 2022 at 2:17 PM

Thank you.

Gershon Wolf

January 3, 2022 at 6:01 PM

This haiku is certainly 'thought-evoking.' Nicely done M.L!

M. L. Kiser

January 11, 2022 at 2:16 PM

I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 3, 2022 at 12:42 PM

- A gem, M.L. :) - // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

January 11, 2022 at 2:16 PM

Thank you.

A New Bud

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