A New Breed

we all try to succeed but we cant find what we need because its lost in this world to be found is to be unbound from societies grip while you let your priorities slip i take your mind on a trip after the kool-aid you sip begins to kick your blood starts to drip and you lose your grip with reality cuz your just another casualty testing your own mortality expressing no sign of morality trying to hide how cowardly you really are ya i took it that far you may think you hard but i leave you scared not physically but emotionally proportionally to me your a small man with no plans on how to get real fans so hear my stand i fight for whats right while i shed light to the night your already out of sight for i have surpassed you and your crew and im done listening to what you spew cuz aint none of its true thats why you turn blue your cyanotic and im psychotic a sociopath reigning down his wrath destroying social class in my mass form of destruction women think its seduction but its just production of a new breed all looking to feed and obtain the highest speed to get away from this devil you have freed inside of me you cant see why im on another level for your head i severed cuz im a soul collector roaming though the night with fellow spectors for i am the true protector of right and wrong and i do it though song angry like kim jong cuz i wont hit the bong i find different ways to deal with stress like finding a woman to caress while i peel off her dress i have a tendency to impress those of a lower status for i strike with malice cuz my soul is calis from a world that showed me no love which is why i rise above the angles and demons for i have my reasons of what to believe in so hear my word i am here to change the world one person at a time be it boy or girl.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 8/1/2011 10:54:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... so enjoyed reading your creative poetry ...enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
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Date: 8/1/2011 10:10:00 AM
Very deep and unique style:)
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Date: 8/1/2011 8:02:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ray. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2011 12:19:00 AM
OH I LOVE THIS POEM VERY MUCH KEEP ON WRITING!
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Date: 7/31/2011 11:36:00 PM
Hey Ray Welcome to the soup with this intersting write. More please
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