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                                    June 28, 2026, entered in Seth Pina's Tree contest

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A Necessary Loss

On this most unusual autumn day
I must say goodbye to an old friend,
a gigantic, ancient oak tree in my front yard:
You have shaded my porch for decades
enabling me to sit in my swing 
on warm days relaxing, reading, and writing poems.
You have been the home of innumerable squirrels.
Little songbirds have perched on your branches
and serenaded me with their delightful trilling. 

Limb by limb, you have been dying for a long time.
Twice, you have had to part with appendages, felled
by saws—at my reluctant bidding, but of necessity.
Some limbs have fallen on their own, in my yard
and even on the road!

Horrendous weather is coming, with ice and high
winds. For others and myself, I fear the huge limbs
on your right side that have been bare for several 
years. How they creak when the wind rises! 
The tree cutters will be here tomorrow. 
Not even a stump will remain at day's end.

From this time forward, I will visualize you
where you once resided. I won't forget you.

Your kinfolk are still here, tall and strong—
as you once were. 
May they thrive long after I am gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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July 2, 2026 at 4:16 AM
Congratulations on your contest win with your excellent poem, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 5:43 PM
Thanks so much, Sotto!
La France Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 3:16 AM
Janice, oh my gosh, what an emotional write i have tears for the old tree, well done , congratulations on your win in the Tree contest ~
Canerdy Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 5:44 PM
Thanks SO much, Constance. Janice
Daniel Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 3:09 AM
A beautiful poem, Janice:)
Canerdy Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 5:44 PM
Thanks so much, Joanna. Janice
Smith  Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 2:13 AM
Please drop a tear-drop from me for your old tree. Though it's time be at an end it has looked after you well.
Canerdy Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 5:45 PM
Thanks so much, Alison! Janice
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