A Naughty Little Girl

I sleep. The hours tick by mercilessly; unfilled, purposeless, full of potential "What to do? What to do???" I mutter, tumbling, like Alice, down the rabbit hole. My hands push down ballooning petticoats, careful not to show or touch anything. I twirl beneath the pile down comforters. The hours tick by crimson red and in the dream, the rose Queen shouts, "Off with HER HEAD!" An eyebrow is plucked whole from my face. It falls matted and to the ground leaving me, brow akimbo, surprised, and horrified. "What to do? What to do? What to do???" Half shorn. Half drawn. Half born? A painter's pallet appears before me. A brow is drawn… for me. Yet, the Rose Queen still screams on. "Off with HER HEAD! Off with HER HEAD!"
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January 27, 2012 at 1:12 AM
debbie, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win * hugs ;-)~p.d
Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 5:59 PM
that's not a fun dream at all!! Congratulations, Deb. I really liked your description in this one.
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 6:32 PM
Cool Debbie! This one is way out there and I like it-congrats!
Guzzi Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 6:47 PM
real dream hon..scary..I guess about not being who and or what my parents wanted me to be..a recurring dream of youth
Bunton Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 4:35 PM
Congratulations
Brown Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 1:39 PM
Congratulations on your win in Olajide's "Dream Land" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Cayton Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 1:59 PM
poppin rose buds is cruel..... didn't understand, I just made a rose rhyme though... coincidently.
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January 18, 2012 at 2:17 PM
‡ You Naughty Girl ‡
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January 18, 2012 at 2:15 PM
‡ Owwww ¥ Spread Your Sweeet Heart ¥ To Taste Your Luv ¥ Always, Rachael ‡
Pettit Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 6:52 PM
I would not know how to interpret that dream of yours. You have described it well here Debbie.
Karr Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 6:05 PM
I like this very much.interesting getting inside of your head...yes....
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