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A Nasty Dream

Occasionally I dream. Black ominous spots in my closed eyes. Dreams I never remember, Dreams I don't want to remember. For when I do I cringe with fear Sit in a corner of my darkened room, Trying unsuccessfully to forget. Fitful recurring dreams, That leaves the palate dry, Devoid of savored zest, Flat as unleavened bread. Dark shadows in a dark room, Swirling, gasping, mutely roaring, Ugly, brusque, dyspeptic, and morose. It gyrates meaninglessly in the void, A menacing, unpleasant stench That eventually dissolves into nothingness. Dreams orchestrated to confuse, Meant to gradually unhinge the mind. So occasionally I dream. The rest I am awake to face The terrors of the night. Note: I wrote this poem in 2003. never posted as far as I know. Sometimes I enjoy dark poems but they are FICTIONAL.

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Date: 5/6/2021 5:29:00 AM
Here it is ! Great read and so well written. Yes it is rewarding to write on subjects on which we must amplify our real life experiences in order to explore the artful side of writing
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Date: 10/7/2020 9:20:00 AM
Darkness yields a more stunning view of lightness :) Perfect write, Linda
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Date: 10/6/2020 12:39:00 PM
Back to read this again, Victor. Such a wonderful write! :)
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 10/6/2020 10:04:00 PM
Thank you Angela. ~~
Date: 10/6/2020 8:02:00 AM
such a dark write Victor so glad its fictional:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/5/2020 12:04:00 PM
I would hat for this to be true, so glad its fiction, Sounds very depressing and you are full of love and life! Blessings and hugs my friend. Jennifer.
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Date: 10/4/2020 4:31:00 AM
I can see the shadows circling in your poem!
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Date: 10/3/2020 5:52:00 PM
This is SO descriptive . I am glad to hear it's fictional!
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Date: 10/3/2020 5:16:00 PM
I am happy to read this is fictional Victor. I sometimes have night terrors and I just try to forget nightmares ASAP. I don’t write dark poetry usually either. This is well written and relatable!. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 10/3/2020 1:30:00 PM
A dark poem with vividly dark imagery...
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Date: 10/2/2020 10:22:00 PM
Victor, this is deep and somewhat dark. I know how it is to not want to remember what some dreams are made of. Thank you for sharing this and bringing it to surface. Even though this might be fictional, I can honestly say, I can relate. I love how you used vivid imagination. Enjoyed. Linda
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Date: 10/2/2020 9:41:00 PM
Nightmare is aptly named-a phantom who rides by night. Sometimes you wake up thrilled that it was only a dream. A well crafted poem, Victor. :)
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Date: 10/2/2020 11:19:00 AM
Oh, I'm glad this is fiction, Victor. From first-hand experience, I know how terrifying nightmares can be. Well written! Hugs, Carolyn
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 10/2/2020 11:22:00 AM
99% of my poems are fiction. Hugs ~~
Date: 10/2/2020 11:03:00 AM
I'm glad that you don't have nightmares like you said in the poem. :) You have an amazing imagination. Excellent write. Peace, Angie
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Date: 10/2/2020 11:23:00 AM
I am glad you liked it. I have many dark writes but all fiction. ~~
Date: 10/2/2020 8:19:00 AM
Glad they are fictional dear friend, I hope your keeping well, safe journey, xo
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Date: 10/2/2020 5:21:00 AM
Your poem evokes all the emotions many feel about a nightmare. Wonderfully done, Victor, to give a voice and shape to a bad dream.
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Date: 10/2/2020 3:31:00 AM
Nicely penned again Victor. Bravo!
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Date: 10/2/2020 3:20:00 AM
- The dreams make their own journey ... and we are passengers, Victor - Great written, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2020 3:19:00 AM
We all get those dreams where you wake up feeling spooked for the rest of the day. Well written Victor. Tom
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Date: 10/1/2020 11:20:00 PM
Shades of E A Poe, Victor, excellent poetry as usual from your wondrous pen.
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Date: 10/1/2020 9:47:00 PM
I think we all have those kind of dreams, dreams that make the heart race. Great fictional write.
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