A Mystic Rose Smile

A mystic rose smile that belonged to my mother this is what I recall   

My easel and I resting in the spirit,  by the grandeur of a morning tilt.  As the  
Yellow sunrays streak across the canvass, I think of Lamancha     
Saffron and mom's tasty soups.  Contentedly I paint away until a          
Ticklish breeze  brings me back to present stay. A lifetime away still I recall the     
Indian sari she wore with shades of orange/gold lamer.  Lustrous  hair pulled  
Carefully back, exposing two dark coaled eyes that shone like brightly lit topaz . 

Red carnelian sun in tonal ranges splashed across a tapestry of love   
Oxidized colors melding into the portraiture of Sahana, Matriarch of Bangalore.   
Smiling at the camera a thousand watts from Lalbagh Botanical Gardens.  Her  
Energy exhumed inside the sketch my recollecting fingertips  

Subservient hands cupping my tiny face, "My little turmeric " 
Maybe you'll be an artist some day, she spoke with her eyes  
I like to think she was the reason I succeeded. Her every word a  
Laud accolade.  I remember the day I held my first paintbrush   
Every time I pick one up today, I think of my mom and a village called Aluru .

November 19, 2021
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Goldsmith Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 8:08 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful story/ win. Your paintbrush is a pen. You paint words with your paintbrush/pen. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Agustin Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 4:03 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me thank the Lord for enabling you to inspire others through your writing talent. God bless you.
Allison Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 7:07 AM
You honour your mother with your wonderful description and precious words, and I would love to see one of your colourful pieces, you are mutilated talented vie! Many congratulations on your win, hugs jan xx
Rose  Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 3:57 PM
Dear Jan, artistry is not one forte but I do paint, my son is the amazing artist in the family, Thankyou for dropping by, much love is coming your way, :)
Edmonds  Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 9:00 AM
I didn’t know you were an artist as well as a fantastic poet. This is a lovely acrostic poem and a wonderful tribute to your mother Mystic. Congratulations! Belle
Rose  Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 11:58 AM
Thank you Belle
Alex Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 8:38 AM
My God! Great Poem on your name. Beautiful acrostic. Congratulations!
Rose  Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 11:58 AM
Thank you Chris
Skelly Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 5:06 AM
A Mystic Rose Smile....Very nice indeed...Delice
Rose  Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 11:58 AM
Thank you Delice
Pandit Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 5:12 AM
WOW! This is a very special poem evoking heavenly memories. Didn't know your mother was from India--didn't know you treasure much from that land. You are multitalented my friend. This special poem goes in my FAVES.
Rose  Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 11:58 AM
Thank you Vijay :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 11:27 PM
I suppose there are many stories or traditions that emanate from the American continent of which I heard nothing about. As an acrostic this is well done. Besides a mother is always to be honoured. ~~
Rose  Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 11:58 AM
Thank you Victor, :)
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