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A Muzdawidj

All is alive and living, rising to light civilizations peak in power’s full might kingdom building, making self’s endeavors right. Jackals searching for water in desert sand dried streams and thorns in wilderness’ empty land Allah’s Truth lost and too blind to understand The dry seed waiting for Allah’s perfect time life contained in dead shell, nature’s paradigm hidden in dark waiting for light and springtime Resurrection is happening every day all things must rise and be reborn a new way for the soul must be transformed within earth’s clay Creation sings of His Glory, to Him Praise for the goodness of all, new life in Time’s phase cycling movement, eternal rebirth always

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Date: 4/25/2018 8:02:00 PM
Hi Sheryl, Beautiful poem...spiritual, but masnavi is a form of couplet... masnavi cannot be "tercet"... your is made of 3 lines... check masnavi in Poterysoup and its example.
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Sheryl Martin
Date: 4/28/2018 5:11:00 PM
Thank you for you comment. However, a Muzdwawidj is the Arabic form of the Masnavi which is a tercet. " Arabic Mathnawi (Also called Muzdawidj) has one major difference in that it is presented as a triplet; a. a. a. / b. b. b. / c. c. c.. pattern, rather than a couplet shown previously." (http://poetscollective.org/poetryforms/tag/persian/)

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