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a musing new year

one reason i hate new year for ~ it happens to rhyme with nuclear war 

said my muse trying to be ironic ~ but this rhymester knew clear more 

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David Kavanagh

ironynew yearword playmonoku

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/2/2024 3:36:00 AM

Clever idea. Sorry but I was ill. Happy New Year.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/2/2024 3:41:00 AM

Heya Victor I’ve had some personal issues that kept me off the soup too, I also apologise for my absence of visits to your page, hopefully you’re on the mend, happy new year to you! Cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/2/2024 12:31:00 AM

With that crackpot in Nth Korea ramping up production of nuclear weapons (with the Kremlins help) the doomsday clock is nearly midnight. I hope we all live to see it out. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/2/2024 1:39:00 AM

He’s a real menace Tom, as indeed is Putin, I’d like to think China has both of them under their economic cosh, and keep both contained, other than that it’s the good old US military machine that keeps the world relatively safe, thanks so much for stopping by with wise words, cheers David

Terry Flood

Date: 1/1/2024 3:41:00 PM

Smashing to see you back on the boards, David, and with a monoku or two that could only be you… of course, ‘new year for’ also rhymes with guffaw! A tremendously happy new year to you. Terry

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/1/2024 3:57:00 PM

Good Man Terry, your always one for a big hearty guffaw, I actually used one guffaw already in my first poem since I came back, (I shall find a way or make one) thanks so much for stopping by, all the best for the new year, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/1/2024 2:51:00 PM

This discourse successfully contrasts the unpleasant consequences of drunk driving on New Year's Eve with the devastation caused by nuclear detonations, David. Last night's pyrotechnics were a sobering reminder of war's devastation. However, I wish you a prosperous 2024.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/1/2024 3:22:00 PM

I hadn’t really considered the drunk driving aspect, but indeed it’s a very real issue on new years eve Lasaad, us humans are definitely drawn towards pyrotechnics and all things explosive, it’s a mad world, all the best for new year, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 1/1/2024 12:51:00 PM

nuclear war vs. knew clear more! Wiseman. It's always on my mind...what I hate is a Mr. Doomsday. (not you) you are all about positive perspectives.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/1/2024 1:22:00 PM

Ha! it’s perhaps a little dodgy on the rhyme front Anaya, I was going to enter it into Andrea’s new year contest, but then seen only one line was allowed in monoku form, yes I write about death sometimes (a lot) but always with the possibilities it brings, even if we’re eradicated by nuclear war! Cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/1/2024 12:19:00 PM

A creative Monoku write. I enjoyed it... Have a blessed day writing away in 24................

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/1/2024 12:36:00 PM

Thanks so much! 2024 already, where does (time) go Paula, I’ve absolutely no idea, well I have a theory, hopefully get a poem going about it soon, cheers David

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