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A Musical Special

I Watched TV last night

a musical special--

not one
of the young singers
had taken time
to learn proper breathing,

to smoothly exhale vowels

crimp the consonants

unlike even the basic cable guy
executing wire

relieved at least
they are not physicians
at my throat--

pools of blood
wail the mystics
bemoaning the letting

intimately knowing
our relationship
to Spirit Divine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/19/2016 6:38:00 PM
Joe, Thanks for the visit to my page...I appreciate the time spent here..Yes, our pets become extended family..Sara..Great critique of the inexperienced voice..There some good ones though in all those that need much help at least over here in those talent contest..
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/20/2016 1:56:00 PM
Thank you so much. I enjoyed your poem very much. Have beautiful day!

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