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A Musical Clue, Ignored.

Throaty, rhythmic guitar rolls Across the room and calms my hands. His voice, like a cigar box angel Pokes around my insides and opens my mouth- It finds plenty of nesting spots. I wait for you to turn around To see each word he has sung Poking out of me in relevant locations.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/9/2011 3:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Nichole. Love Carol
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Date: 2/21/2011 2:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Nichole. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2011 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations and best wishes. GBU. Ernilando
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Date: 6/5/2010 9:13:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 6/4/2010 2:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Nichole. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2010 6:45:00 AM
Oh, nice! Unique, really. The closing line is fabulous, especially on the heels of the remainder. I enjoyed this.
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Date: 4/9/2010 3:20:00 PM
oh excellent, I know this one in my soul.
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Date: 4/9/2010 12:37:00 PM
Nichole! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 4/8/2010 3:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Nichole. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2010 7:46:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/4/2010 4:31:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, good one!!
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Date: 4/4/2010 3:18:00 PM
Interesting perspective for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/4/2010 1:19:00 PM
Nichole, many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 4/4/2010 10:52:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem Ernilando
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Date: 2/21/2010 10:19:00 PM
Stop the lights..................smile!
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