A Muffled Sound

A muffled sound
    that I knew not
  as it echoed
    across my lot

  It spoke in code
    to primal fear
  seemed to cry
    Get out of here

  O, how I wish I could
    make out the words
  Tho' that success
    would rob my guess

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Date: 7/8/2023 2:51:00 PM
Wow! How nibs a,Erin g these lines are for me, I wouldn’t dare tell him to even say it what that was. A fascinating poem Panagiota Panagiota
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Date: 7/8/2023 12:02:00 AM
It is one of those ahir on the back of your neck scares my friend...
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Date: 7/7/2023 3:55:00 PM
If the words aren’t audible perhaps they’re not meant for your ears…don’t lean in…run
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Date: 7/7/2023 3:14:00 PM
You dropped your wallet on a thick carpet. Problem solved! ;-)
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Date: 7/7/2023 1:08:00 PM
Very spooky to hear something go bump in the night~
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Date: 7/6/2023 9:42:00 PM
Interesting poem the Mr Wolf and a wee bit eerie!! Debx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/8/2023 10:06:00 PM
Wrote in on a raft, floating along Lake Erie. (Groan). ~ gw
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