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A Mothers Truth

A Mothers Truth Four kids running through the house did create a mighty din At times it still rang in my head even after I tucked them in I would never change a thing I hold them high above For all the happiness they bring They're my children, they're my love.

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Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/19/2017 9:33:00 PM

I love this wonderful little poem that says so much about the 'joys' of motherhood Lenna . . . but four children, you are one special mom:) Amitiés

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/22/2017 6:11:00 PM

Hi Anne Marie, I just found this, my mail doesn't send me notices anymore and I don't know why. Thank you for your sweet comment :) My Mom had 8, I was 2nd born, the first girl. I had TONS of experience with kids way before I had a set of twins and 2 others of my own. Anyway, Thank you and I was/am a special Mom... (cheeky grin) :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/16/2017 3:24:00 PM

Very well expressed, Lenna. Children are such a joy ... to be blessed to shape and guide their innocent minds is a gift. Wonderful poem, dear. Love and more love to you and yours.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/17/2017 11:15:00 AM

Thank You kindly Freddie :) My Mom had 8, and I decided very young that I would only have 4 ...... what was funny .... on the 3rd pregnancy I decided 3 would be it, then I had twins........ hahaha, I got those 4 I planned on after all. Thank you for stopping by Freddie :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/16/2017 12:58:00 PM

Your feelings surface and carry the reader into an emotional tide and let it wash over us. The words are meaningful and the message is tenderly offered and accepted. Emile.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/17/2017 11:11:00 AM

Thank You for your kind comments Emile, I appreciate your visit :)

Darren White

Date: 5/16/2017 2:26:00 AM

You have four children, Lenna? Or is my autistic mind taking things literally again :) Anyway, I love this sweet poem very much. I can see the tiredness kick in after a whole day, but the love is so obvious too!

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 5/16/2017 3:26:00 PM

My mother had 13 of us, but believe me four is a load too. Great job being a mother, Lenna. Love and hugs,

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/16/2017 10:35:00 AM

Hi Darren :) Yes, I do have 4 children. One set of twins (boy and girl) and 2 older daughters and believe me, they did tire me out... especially when I worked full time also. Thank You, I am glad you liked it :)

Chris Green

Date: 5/15/2017 5:37:00 PM

Now this is the perfect Mother's Day poem. Short, sweet and filled with love. Simply beautiful Lenna.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/16/2017 10:31:00 AM

Thanks Chris.... yes, written on the same day. My Mother's days are all about seeing both.... my kids and my Mom :)