A Mother's Time

A Father's time's seen in his graying beard
    A Mother's time is respected, revered

  Father's grow old; they're let go
    The sparkle of age in a Mother glows
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Goldsmith Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 12:11 PM
What a fun write. I really enjoyed it. Have a fun day writing away.............
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 4:01 PM
But, papas are beloved too, the wisdom found in the greying beard is much missed in my life. My dad was so wise, strong, and caring. The 1960's song 'My Dad' used to make me cry as a child because it was so like my own dad. I will never let him go from my heart and memory. We so miss him. He was loved so very much! Silver and gold are both very precious treasure :)
Hawkins Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 3:51 PM
A lovely couple, let. Take care, Shirley.
Wolf Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 7:54 PM
Thanks for the fun comment, Shirley.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 7:52 AM
Aww…so sweet! Mamas with hearts of gold!
Wolf Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 7:54 PM
Keep me searchin' for that heart of gold, I say! ~ Neal, not-so-young-anymore
Turner Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 6:53 AM
The beauty on the inside can be seen from the outside:) Another good one GW.
Wolf Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 7:52 PM
Beauty shines right through, doesn't it?
Fowler Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 6:17 AM
Hmmm. I like this gw. As Michelle says, "what a pair". Well done! :)
Wolf Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 7:50 PM
Thank you Linda. Merriment and laughter, gw
Lawless Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 5:13 AM
When I show up the Grandkids shout....WHERE'S GRAMMY....
Wolf Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 7:46 PM
Hmm. Me, too. Maybe we have the same grandkids -- or the same wife?! lol.
Buehler Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 10:38 PM
An interesting contrast of characters, making an enjoyable poem. :)
Wolf Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 7:43 PM
Thanks for letting me know, Evelyn. Blessings and bounty, Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 8:47 PM
Father Time and Mother Nature, quite a pair :)
Wolf Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 7:43 PM
Hm. Hadn't thought of Father Time and Mother Nature as a 'pair.' Interesting. Thanks, Michelle
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