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A Mother's Time

A Father's time's seen in his graying beard A Mother's time is respected, revered Father's grow old; they're let go The sparkle of age in a Mother glows

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 3/7/2023 12:11:00 PM
What a fun write. I really enjoyed it. Have a fun day writing away.............
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Date: 3/6/2023 4:01:00 PM
But, papas are beloved too, the wisdom found in the greying beard is much missed in my life. My dad was so wise, strong, and caring. The 1960's song 'My Dad' used to make me cry as a child because it was so like my own dad. I will never let him go from my heart and memory. We so miss him. He was loved so very much! Silver and gold are both very precious treasure :)
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Date: 3/6/2023 3:51:00 PM
A lovely couple, let. Take care, Shirley.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/7/2023 7:54:00 PM
Thanks for the fun comment, Shirley.
Date: 3/6/2023 7:52:00 AM
Aww…so sweet! Mamas with hearts of gold!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/7/2023 7:54:00 PM
Keep me searchin' for that heart of gold, I say! ~ Neal, not-so-young-anymore
Date: 3/6/2023 6:53:00 AM
The beauty on the inside can be seen from the outside:) Another good one GW.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/7/2023 7:52:00 PM
Beauty shines right through, doesn't it?
Date: 3/6/2023 6:17:00 AM
Hmmm. I like this gw. As Michelle says, "what a pair". Well done! :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/7/2023 7:50:00 PM
Thank you Linda. Merriment and laughter, gw
Date: 3/6/2023 5:13:00 AM
When I show up the Grandkids shout....WHERE'S GRAMMY....
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/7/2023 7:46:00 PM
Hmm. Me, too. Maybe we have the same grandkids -- or the same wife?! lol.
Date: 3/5/2023 10:38:00 PM
An interesting contrast of characters, making an enjoyable poem. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/7/2023 7:43:00 PM
Thanks for letting me know, Evelyn. Blessings and bounty, Gershon
Date: 3/5/2023 8:47:00 PM
Father Time and Mother Nature, quite a pair :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/7/2023 7:43:00 PM
Hm. Hadn't thought of Father Time and Mother Nature as a 'pair.' Interesting. Thanks, Michelle

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