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4/15/2025 for MOTHER'S DAY Poetry Contest sponsored by Benjamin Bartley

A Mother's Shelter

A mother's arms will make a boy feel warm. 
Without her, the world would be strange and cold.
She keeps her darling safe from fear and harm 
and offers him a loving hand to hold.

She watches over him where he may go
and always holds him tightly to her breast.  
She shields him when the winds of winter blow, 
but for her, in the world, he'd be a guest. 

So, I hold your picture in my pocket,
and I know that I will no longer cry. 
It's safe at home in its precious locket.
We'll meet again, as, in the snow, I die.

Together we will bask in heaven's joy, 
Just you and me, your loving orphan boy.
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Maul Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 8:24 AM
I appreciate this piece. Good writing.
Crandall Avatar
April 18, 2025 at 9:52 AM
Thanks Michael!
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 10:44 AM
Hello David crandall, A loving , tEnjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/ouching poem for your mother. Happy Easter.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 4:14 PM
Hello David Crandall, Happy Easter to you. Enjoy your easter. my friend. /Darlene/
Crandall Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 11:27 AM
Thanks Darlene - happy Easter!
Suri Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 7:18 PM
Oh... wow.. how bittersweet. I'm glad you cherish your mother and know that she is with you. I'm sure she is watching from heaven; even as an atheist-- one day you two will reunite. And she will love you just as much as when you were a child <3 great poem. xxx
Crandall Avatar
April 15, 2025 at 7:38 PM
Thanks Reya, This let's me know that you also read my poem prior to this :-))
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