A Mothers Love

Eyes lock
A mother and her first born 
Pure love flooding her veins 
Heart bursting with pride 
Devotion silently pledged for eternity 
For nine months 
Nurtured and cherished 
Hearts beating together 
As one 

Hearts lock 
A girl and her first love 
As eyes meet
Devotion grasps them both 
Innocent affection engulfing her soul 
Her smile beams widely with joy 
Hearts beating in unison 
Glowing with pride 
As one

Fate bringing them together 
The first born and his first love 
Made for each other 
Deeply in love 
A shimmering diamond ring 
A promise to love for eternity 
Happiness unites two families 
Together smiling
As one
 
That perfect day 
The mother lost her first born 
To his first love  
Pure love flows through their hearts 
Now abandoned  
The mother sobs
Silently
Alone 
As one 

Salty tears sting her eyes 
Thoughts from the past sprint through her mind
The moment she met her first born 
Devotion and pure love 
For eternity 
Forever and forever 
A mother for her first born 
A love only felt now 
By one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/29/2024 4:54:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/22/2019 10:22:00 AM
Sarah, oh how beautifully written!
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Date: 11/22/2016 5:19:00 AM
Very touching and nice ...
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