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A Mother’s Lap

A mother’s lap of gentle grace.
Side table set with Gospel light.
Sans Doctor Spock, God’s brilliance.

Instilled the worth of womb and tears,
Of blood and nails, and Shepherd’s crook.

Breaking fluid, warmth, and swaddle.
Suspense of hope, faith, love and mirrors.

Reflection of mother and child.
A stable environment.

Made visible -
A star one night,
To find our way home.

Joseph couldn’t have dreamt
Of a better home -
His dreams bigger
In the hands of the Father.

Mother Mary fed the King of kings
before Christ fed the crowd
with multiplying bread and fish.

Joseph taught Jesus carpentry.
As Christ touched the wood,
Did His palms ache?

Without Joseph,
at the foot
of the crucifix,
a flood of tears;
red cheeks.

A mother’s lap of gentle grace
not forgotten -
in agony, Christ remembers
her great sacrifice.
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Kendrick Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 4:27 PM
It would be very hard to understand the love that God/Man of the personhood of Jesus could have felt for His mother. Jesus was love incarnated into flesh, but Mary was just a human. Thanks for sharing this one with us. A very creative way to go with the topic. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
December 18, 2025 at 4:37 AM
Thank you, Sara! Hugs and Merry Christmas!
George Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 4:45 AM
I always feel bad when I think that Mother Mary had not the fortune to be by the side of Joseph in her most acute hours of pain. The story of nativity and the final crucifixion so touchingly described. Wish you a Happy Christmas, dear Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 5:21 AM
Her love and sorrow side by side. John must have been endearing to her before Jesus gave her into John’s protection. He knew John would be around. Joseph was integral to our Savior’s story. Jesus knew the sadness of death, of losing an earthly father…how much worse to miss out on our Heavenly Father. God bless and Merry Christmas, dear Valsa!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 4:54 PM
wow! Amazing write...left me speechless. Faving!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 6:18 PM
I appreciate your fave, Sara! Thank you!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 8:08 AM
WOW!!! What a Christmas write/story you have told. Great Picture... Have A Very Blessed Christmas and New Year 2026............
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 2:01 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 1:52 AM
From a manger to a cross drained of blood. The mighty God shows us what humility is. Lovely poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 4:47 AM
Thank you, Victor! <3
Hind Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 6:42 PM
This is marvelous, Kim!! One of the best Christmas poems, truly... meaningfully delicate language creates this beautiful atmosphere. <3
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 4:47 AM
Thank you kindly, Paige!
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