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A Mother's Figure From Dreams

A mother's figure from my dreams, shining bright through the sun beams. You come like an angel so very sweet, as many butterflies come to greet. A world is now filled with love, together can we both fly like a dove?
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George Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 10:36 PM
Lovely rhyming and sweet sentiments. All the best in the contest, dear Paula.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 8:29 AM
Thank You, for your visit/reading/writing. Also Thanks for your, All the best in the contest. Glad you found this to be a, Lovely rhyming and sweet sentiments. Great to see you here. I enjoyed writing this one. Dream away as you go writing away...............
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 9:36 PM
Sweet poem, Paula. She sure does sound like a dream angel.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 1:31 PM
Thank You, for your visit/reading/writing. Glad you found this to be a, Sweet poem. Yes, Moms are angels. Great to see you here. I enjoyed writing this one. Dream away as you go writing away...............
Loving Iii Avatar
April 23, 2026 at 7:24 PM
It was dreamy. But Moms are one of a kind. Not like wives but guaranteed. Thanks for this.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 1:29 PM
Thank You, for your visit/reading/writing. Glad you found this to be, dreamy. Yes, Moms sure are one of a kind. Great to see you here. I enjoyed writing this one. Dream away as you go writing away...............
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 23, 2026 at 4:53 PM
a tender and appropriate poem for the contest. best wishes with this entry, blessings, Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 1:28 PM
Thank You, for your visit/reading/writing. Also Thanks for your, best wishes with this entry. Glad you enjoyed this write. Great to see you here. I enjoyed writing this one. Dream away as you go writing away...............
Ball Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 8:33 PM
Lovely Paula. Filled with emotion and tenderness. God Bless , JB
Goldsmith Avatar
April 23, 2026 at 9:50 AM
Thank You, for your visit/reading/writing. Glad you found this to be, Lovely. Great to see you here. I enjoyed writing this one. Dream away as you go writing away...............
Kendrick Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 4:31 PM
This one reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Dreams are wonderful when we can see once again our loved ones. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
April 23, 2026 at 9:49 AM
Thank You, for your visit/reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Great to see you here. I enjoyed writing this one. Dream away as you go writing away...............
Narain Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 12:15 PM
A great poem. Really liked it.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 23, 2026 at 9:48 AM
Thank You, for your visit/reading/writing. Glad you found this to be, A great poem. Great to see you here. Also glad you, Really liked it. I enjoyed writing this one. Dream away as you go writing away...............
DiMino Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 2:35 AM
Well said, Paula. I have had many such visitations. By departed loved ones, angels or saints -- the reality of spirit when rightly in touch, is far wilder and more beautiful than any romantic fiction.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 11:40 AM
Thank You, for your visit/reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Great to see you here. I would love to see an angel. I know people that have. Maybe one day, I will. I enjoyed writing this one. Dream away as you go writing away...............
Edmonds  Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 2:19 AM
That’s lovely Paula. All the best for the contest… Beryl
Goldsmith Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 11:36 AM
Thank You, for your visit/reading/writing. Also Thanks for your, All the best for the contest. Glad you found this to be, lovely. Great to see you here. I enjoyed writing this one. Dream away as you go writing away...............
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 5:27 PM
touching words.....enjoyed! wishing you well, hugs, Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 11:34 AM
Thank You, for your visit/reading/writing. Also Thanks for your, wishing me well. Glad you found this to have, touching words. Great to see you here. I enjoyed writing this one. Dream away as you go writing away...............
Hind Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 4:09 PM
in the second stanza I think you meant to type "shining" - just helping out, good luck, love that ending
Goldsmith Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 11:31 AM
Thank You, for your visit/reading/writing. Also Thanks for your, good luck/help with spelling. I sometime type toooo fast. I should check better. Great to see you here. Glad you love my ending. I enjoyed writing this one. Dream away as you go writing away................
Goldsmith Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 12:04 PM
"A Mother's Figure From Dreams." ~ Date Writen:4/21/2016 ~ Written By Human Poet............
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