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A Mothers Advice-W

A mother’s advice

One mother’s advice
To her daughter on her marriage,
“It is easy to keep a man,
Be a maid in the living room,
A cook in the kitchen
And a whore in the bedroom”.

Quick came the reply from the daughter,
She would hire the other two
And take care of the bedroom bit.

Another mother’s advice,
To her daughter on her marriage,
“Be a good maid in your work
Be mother like while in the kitchen,
Be a secretary to your husband in his work,
And a celestial nymph in the bedroom”.

The daughter added to it,
“She will be all-in-one”
 
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Sixth Place win in:

Contest: Anything Goes by P.D.,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/22/2014 8:54:00 PM
Dr. Ram This is a clever and humorous write. Made me smile and chuckle. Nicely done. Thanks for the congrats and nice comment on my January poem.
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Date: 7/20/2011 6:05:00 PM
Congrats on the win! It was a very entertaining poem....
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Date: 7/20/2011 2:00:00 PM
Congrats on your win! great piece!!!! and Great write ... always Michael
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Date: 7/19/2011 3:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win Dr. Ram in P.D's contest. Alexa
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Date: 7/19/2011 1:46:00 PM
Sounds like both Mothers need to move to California ;) Mother #3 "learn to make your own money and understand the household finances. Serve raw foods, fruits and veggies and serve only healthy drinks. Give your husband a copy of the Kamasutra so he can learn his part.....Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 7/19/2011 11:22:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Dr Ram : )
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Date: 7/19/2011 10:10:00 AM
Dr. Ram, congratulations on your win in PD's contest ;)
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Date: 7/19/2011 4:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest "Anything Goes" Dr. Ram. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2011 3:50:00 AM
congrats on your win Dr. Ram luv cory
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Date: 7/18/2011 11:59:00 PM
congrats on your win Dr. Ram, David
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Date: 7/18/2011 9:21:00 PM
Interesting, great read and very clever, quite amusing actually. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 7/18/2011 8:27:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on another special win with another great composition luv.. enjoy...
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Date: 4/13/2010 2:17:00 PM
And what is the husband to be? .... smile ... Thanks for bringing your talents to PoetrySoup Dr. Ram and I look forward to reading more of your writing !!
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Date: 1/2/2010 6:52:00 PM
Cute, my mother always said the wedding vows needed to be changed to, Love, Cherish, and negotiate....Mother's are so smart.....loved your write, always, Christy
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Date: 1/2/2010 6:23:00 PM
Cute and clever. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/2/2010 6:21:00 PM
interesting advice, thanks for the feed back on my poem.
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