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A Mother' Ears

A mother’s ears - fine tuned will pick up on her infant whimpering in the middle of the night. Whether the baby’s cries are soft or even if the mother herself is deep in restful sleep, her child’s distress will prick her ears rousing her from even her sweetest dreams. A mother’s arms will cradle her small son, wrapping him in a loving warmth that will abide with him to his dying day. Her cooing voice will ease his unnamed fears; her gentle eyes will instill in his developing mind an image of devotion, which reinforced through time, will compel him to seek a mate who will look at him one day in that same adoring way A mother’s ears will hear at last her child breathing deeply. Then the mother’s heart will swell with quiet delight knowing she has comforted her son. For Richard Lamoureux's Applicable Not Applicable Contests Poetry Contest Why I think this poem deserves to be read: When I first wrote this one, I could feel it unfolding very naturally in a style I do not often use. I can't recall if the contest asked specifically for free verse, but I felt that I had done a nice job with that form. That is why I was surprised when I got an N/A. More surprising to me is that I got two other N/A's when I entered it into other contests based on mothers (using old or new poems). I had hoped for this one to get more attention because it's one of my better tributes to mothers and entails my strong feelings on how important a mother is in the development of her children, particularly in the emotional development of her son(s). Sorry it is not a humorous story. I know I have a good funny one somewhere that got an N/A, but I can't remember its title any more or how to find it! Also, I have N/A poems better than this, but I do not feel comfortable using a poem that has N/A in one contest but a win in another, so that is another reason why I decided on this one. To my knowledge it has all N/A's.

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Date: 8/7/2015 10:02:00 AM
beautiful words. love phyl
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Date: 6/5/2015 1:25:00 PM
That is lovely. My mum left home when I was just 13 so lost out on many years but I'm always here for mine I don't blame my mum just missed too many years been apart
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Date: 6/4/2015 3:47:00 PM
Hello Andrea!! A Very Beautiful and Quite Meaningful Write here. The sensing of a Mother's Ears and the warmth and strength of her caressing arms certainly bring back positive memories for most of us. A Mother's Love, without a doubt, is something very special we take with us for the rest of our lives. Very Well-Done!! A "7" + FAV!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 5/17/2015 4:25:00 PM
Mother is always greatest of all for me. Nice poem read from you genius. 7+ sure. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 5/13/2015 3:35:00 PM
This one is tender and touching. I remember when I was young and pregnant. I told my mom I would be afraid to sleep after the babies came because I wouldn't be able to hear them. She told me I would always hear my children, every whimper, every cry, even every giggle. And she was right.
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Date: 5/12/2015 10:56:00 AM
Her loving look lingers from the cradle to the grave. This is special, Andrea. Love, daver
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Date: 5/12/2015 1:08:00 AM
This poem is so revealing of a Mother's tender love Andrea. I love your fourth stanza where you express how often a man seeks out a mate that shows the same devotion for her as his mother. A wonderful entry for the contest. I am sure it will garner top honors. 7
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Date: 5/11/2015 5:37:00 PM
so true Andrea you have perfectly caught the essence of motherhood gl in contest hugs 7
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Date: 5/11/2015 9:31:00 AM
Even in the Bible, the mother is praised ! Proverbs 31:28- Beautiful touch dear poet for the mothers who have taken part with gift of life ! TY for this nuturing write Andrea.............much love, james
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Date: 5/11/2015 4:01:00 AM
Very sweet poem by you Andrea.Best wishes for the contest.Yes,I love those forms...Triolet and Pantoum.Will try to write few poems in these forms.
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Date: 5/11/2015 12:43:00 AM
This poem caught my ears n eyes as i have young ones and found the whole poem beautifully true, was nodding n smiling in acknowledgement at each line. So superb and apt for mothers day! Yeah both n me n hubby keep our ears prickd at night lest a child is crying for some reason and both of us wake up n rush when they do. And wow u wrote a freeverse. Take care pal.
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Date: 5/10/2015 9:18:00 PM
This is just beautiful, Andrea! I knew it would be. I think it just took me a lot longer to say the same thing. All mothers seem to have fine-tuned hearing when it comes to their children's voices and cries. When I was in the hospital after Dylan was born, it amazed me that I knew his cries from the nursery over the other babies!
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Date: 5/10/2015 5:12:00 PM
awww, lovely write here, Andrea. Thanks - enjoyed the contest. Have soooo much catching up to do, so will just read a few of yours at random tonight
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Date: 5/10/2015 3:25:00 PM
So soothing..Enjoyed reading your mother's day work..I am glad that I chose this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 5/10/2015 1:08:00 PM
Happy Mother's Day - I am going to a party at my sister's house. Fortunately my mother is still around. I like the last 2 lines of the poem a lot. I will keep you in my prayers. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/10/2015 11:13:00 AM
Nicely done Andrea -- my mother's ears always hear me sneaking in late at night!! I could not get past her ears. All the best.
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Date: 5/10/2015 10:33:00 AM
Aw, that's so sweet Andrea! I always like seeing through a mother's eyes...
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Date: 5/10/2015 10:26:00 AM
What a beautiful poem!!! I can feel the warmth of mother's love shining in this beautiful piece. Happy Mothers Day. A 7.
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Date: 5/10/2015 10:19:00 AM
What a beautiful sight to behold, a mother who can sense the slightest change in her childs breathing.... nice pen... happy mothers day Andrea... hugs, nad
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Date: 5/10/2015 10:08:00 AM
A very beautiful poem for Mother's Day this is my very dear friend, Andrea. Hugging it and you! Stopping by also to greet you a Happy Mother's Day! God bless you always! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
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Date: 5/10/2015 9:42:00 AM
It is a beautiful sight. A mother comforting her child. Happy Mothers Day !!
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Date: 5/10/2015 9:23:00 AM
simply delightful Andrea I am sure so many here can relate to this tender write - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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