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Written September 16, 2026
For The Contest, Pick-A-Title, Vol. 59
Theme: “A Most Distant Sun”   ~ Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

A Most Distant Sun

Knowing our Sun was once a star
permits my thoughts to wander far.
Raising my eyes at night to see
the twinkling stars look back at me.

The closest ones fill out my view,
and far beyond Earth's avenue,
deep endless space holds many more
beyond which we cannot explore

Are we alone- most want to know!
Probability assumes no!
A star can turn into a Sun-
attracting planets to be spun.

A distant Sun could be like ours
progressing from the realm of stars,
develop its own atmosphere;
that part for life becomes so clear.

Providing all the minerals
and moisture in the air that spills
in making clouds that form the rain
which living things must have, retain.

The law of probability
says yes! Impossibility -
Earth can not be the only one!
Surely, there is a distant Sun.
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