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A Most Beautiful Goodbye

We should've been sad 
         and blue, but strangely 
       we found ourselves caged 
      in saccharine-sweet ecstasy.

    She walked away, leaving me
         floating in the clouds, 
      with bejeweled memories
       to steadfastly hold on to.

      Tenderly, we kissed, then
        she gives me one more
               upon my brow  
        for the road on parting.

    Within stone-throw distance,
      she slowly turns her head;
              her hair flopping
          over her smiling eyes...

         in the noontide zephyr.
     she blows me one last kiss,
       and we exchanged waves.
       A most beautiful goodbye.


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Date written: 06/16/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hamilton Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 11:12 AM
Very tenderly written Edward I enjoyed this very much!
Ibeh Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 3:08 PM
Thank you so much, John:-) I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
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