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A Most Beautiful Goodbye

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We should've been sad and blue, but strangely we found ourselves caged in saccharine-sweet ecstasy. She walked away, leaving me floating in the clouds, with bejeweled memories to steadfastly hold on to. Tenderly, we kissed, then she gives me one more upon my brow for the road on parting. Within stone-throw distance, she slowly turns her head; her hair flopping over her smiling eyes... in the noontide zephyr. she blows me one last kiss, and we exchanged waves. A most beautiful goodbye. COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (13)any form any theme contest (Winner: 1st Place) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date written: 06/16/2020

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Date: 6/17/2020 11:12:00 AM
Very tenderly written Edward I enjoyed this very much!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/17/2020 3:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, John:-) I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!

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