Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

A Morning Write

by Michael J Falotico

                                                     The morning light shines..
                                                 The glow reaches my still pen..
                                                      Now dreams are written..
                                                   
                                                              Inspiring bliss..
                                                  Now the sounds of day whisper..
                                                           Music to my words..

                                                          As the morning slips..
                                                      A buffet of poems are born..
                                                        With a sun drenched feel..
                                                          

"Morning ,Noon and Night"
Senryu contest by Francine Roberts

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Kash Poet August 31, 2011 at 10:04 PM Congratulations Michael on your win in Francine's contest.Wonderful Senryus here.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 30, 2011 at 10:00 PM what happened to the Giants-Jets exhibition game..know they postponed it due to hurricane but it was supposed to be played Monday night.. no did happen luv.. was so mad.. now the Jets are playing Eagles Thursday.. I am confused luv.. your J.G. in football fever mode..oh..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 30, 2011 at 9:58 PM Congrats Michael luv on an exciting win with magnificent poetry as these words ..a precious poem.. as always.. enjoy with luv as your J.G. is in bronzing mode..oh..xoxoxo

Sara Kendrick August 30, 2011 at 4:51 PM Inspired morn..Enjoyed..Congrats..Sara

Dinda Minardi August 30, 2011 at 10:54 AM Congratulation, dear my fave poet. Told you this was a good writing :) Of course I'll be honored to collaborate with you again. Just let me know by mail, okay Michael. :) Or I'll do it if I get inspiration in what theme we should collaborate.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2011 at 7:24 AM Congratulations on your well deserved winning piece Michael. Love, Carol

David Williams August 30, 2011 at 3:08 AM hey Michael congrats on a superb win, David

Francine Roberts August 29, 2011 at 11:22 PM congrats on your fourth place win Michael, great piece

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 24, 2011 at 3:13 PM Michael luv just posted our newest collab .. entitled "Darkness to Light" .. so u can post also luv.. thankxx for lending me your creative lines to work with luv.. they are always ultra inspiring .. luv forever and always..

Wilma Neels August 24, 2011 at 10:21 AM Love the idea of "a buffet of poems" Michael ;) this one made me smile.. Hope you are okay, cool to hear that picture ended up being your wallpaper :) love ya Wilma

David Williams August 24, 2011 at 4:30 AM hey Michael bliss to read as well,, good luck, my friend, David

Kash Poet August 23, 2011 at 3:44 PM This is wonderful Michael...liked it.Best wishes.

Constance La France August 23, 2011 at 10:56 AM Just lovely,Michael, I love to write in the morning, somehow I am just inspired, fresh, new. and all my dreams are waitingto unfurl, anyways, I wish you the very best in the contest ~~

Dinda Minardi August 23, 2011 at 10:28 AM Wow this is a senryu-narrative form. You can show us 5 pages event in 9 lines only. Good writings as always, Michael :)

Andrea Dietrich August 23, 2011 at 9:52 AM This is one of the most poetic series I have read in this contest, Michael. It's very beautiful. Too bad I am not a morning person so that I could have thought of such a lovely idea.But my muse wears a gown of stars and glistens in the moon!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 23, 2011 at 9:47 AM beautiful ambiance in this piece Michael luv.. such a delight to read your poetry always ...good luck in the contest .. u took the theme to a new level luv.. your J.G. in Florida sunshine mode with threat of hurricane Irene hovering ..oh..

Cory Long August 23, 2011 at 9:30 AM I love it!!!! good luck in the contest.. cory

Gwendolen Song August 23, 2011 at 8:27 AM Oh, Lucky Me! The first to read this sunshining senryu! Writing poetry in the morning is my preference too. Francine will adore this. Best to you, Michael. Gwendolen

Cyndi Macmillan August 23, 2011 at 8:10 AM Thumbs WAY up! This is truly lovely, Michael. Especially liked the last 2 lines as they kept the imagery perfectly. Sure to place high! Cheers from Cyndi

Nick Bagnall August 23, 2011 at 8:02 AM Sounds like you had a nice morning. Enjoyed you poem(s). Michael J. Falotico August 23, 2011 at 8:07 AM Thank you my friend...