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A Morning Alouette

Greet this lovely morn!
A bright day is born.
Sun is on diurnal shift
Birds take on their wing
Soaring high, they sing.
In the sky, vagrant clouds drift.

The dale, dressed in style 
Fragrant flowers smile
In me waves of pure joy rise. 
Wind tousles my curls
Great beauty unfurls
Here’s another paradise!

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2024

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JCB Brul Date: 12/4/2024 8:13:00 AM This poem is a beaming with joy and appreciation for nature with beauty of the morning captured with rhythmic flow and vivid imagery. Cheerful tone such as "fragrant flowers smile" makes me smile also. Congratulations dear friend. ^__^ Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 12/3/2024 11:54:00 AM Dearest Valsa, what a wonderful portrait of serenity drinking in the the beauty of a sunrise! A morning elixir! Even though I'm not a morning person, when I do see the sunrise I feel the emotions of your poem, dear friend! Congratulations on your win! Sending you Advent blessings of sunlight pushing aside midnight! Login to Reply

Beata Agustin Date: 12/3/2024 7:45:00 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from start 'til the end. God bless you. Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 12/3/2024 2:50:00 AM A picturesque nature illustration. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/2/2024 11:16:00 PM It's strange that my favorite lines in stanza two were the ones not metered correctly. However, I really like this gem. Congrats in my contedt oh and love the picture now that I see it Login to Reply Valsa George Date: 12/3/2024 3:24:00 AM Thanks a lot dear Andrea for the contest and the placement given.....

thriveni c mysore Date: 12/2/2024 8:43:00 PM paradise it is. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers. Login to Reply

Zyrool Gifford Date: 11/19/2024 12:20:00 PM Hello Valsa, both picture and words of your poem are very uplifting. Good luck with the contest, my friend. Stay Blessed. Login to Reply

Hilda Greenhough Date: 11/17/2024 5:54:00 PM Thank you for such a happy, uplifting poem. Good luck with the contest. Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 11/17/2024 7:36:00 AM Your poem is as excellent as your picture. So wonderful. I loved seeing flowers smile, dear Valsa. Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 11/17/2024 7:18:00 AM "Fragrant flowers smile" -- Such a lovely visual! Indeed, enjoy the paradise God has given us. Blessings. Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 11/16/2024 9:54:00 AM Nice poem. Love it. And a beautiful picture too. Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 11/16/2024 5:26:00 AM A lovely write Valsa such wonderful imagery and joyful experience taking in the beauty of an early rise. Feeling and experiencing heaven on earth. Loved it Valsa such a refreshing piece this is as I look out my glass sliding door and see the sun and the beauty of morning you have shared so well. My best wishes in this contest, a wonderful entry to judge... Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 11/16/2024 3:17:00 AM Love the start of day, you wonder what surprises it will bring. Enjoy your weekend Valsa. Tom Login to Reply