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A Morning Alouette

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November- 16-2024

Alouette Me Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich

Greet this lovely morn! A bright day is born. Sun is on diurnal shift Birds take on their wing Soaring high, they sing. In the sky, vagrant clouds drift. The dale, dressed in style Fragrant flowers smile In me waves of pure joy rise. Wind tousles my curls Great beauty unfurls Here’s another paradise!

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JCB Brul

Date: 12/4/2024 8:13:00 AM

This poem is a beaming with joy and appreciation for nature with beauty of the morning captured with rhythmic flow and vivid imagery. Cheerful tone such as "fragrant flowers smile" makes me smile also. Congratulations dear friend. ^__^

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/3/2024 11:54:00 AM

Dearest Valsa, what a wonderful portrait of serenity drinking in the the beauty of a sunrise! A morning elixir! Even though I'm not a morning person, when I do see the sunrise I feel the emotions of your poem, dear friend! Congratulations on your win! Sending you Advent blessings of sunlight pushing aside midnight!

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/3/2024 7:45:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from start 'til the end. God bless you.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/3/2024 2:50:00 AM

A picturesque nature illustration. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2024 11:16:00 PM

It's strange that my favorite lines in stanza two were the ones not metered correctly. However, I really like this gem. Congrats in my contedt oh and love the picture now that I see it

Valsa George
Date: 12/3/2024 3:24:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear Andrea for the contest and the placement given.....

thriveni c mysore

Date: 12/2/2024 8:43:00 PM

paradise it is. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 11/19/2024 12:20:00 PM

Hello Valsa, both picture and words of your poem are very uplifting. Good luck with the contest, my friend. Stay Blessed.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/17/2024 5:54:00 PM

Thank you for such a happy, uplifting poem. Good luck with the contest.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/17/2024 7:36:00 AM

Your poem is as excellent as your picture. So wonderful. I loved seeing flowers smile, dear Valsa.

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/17/2024 7:18:00 AM

"Fragrant flowers smile" -- Such a lovely visual! Indeed, enjoy the paradise God has given us. Blessings.

Jay Narain

Date: 11/16/2024 9:54:00 AM

Nice poem. Love it. And a beautiful picture too.

Michael Tor

Date: 11/16/2024 5:26:00 AM

A lovely write Valsa such wonderful imagery and joyful experience taking in the beauty of an early rise. Feeling and experiencing heaven on earth. Loved it Valsa such a refreshing piece this is as I look out my glass sliding door and see the sun and the beauty of morning you have shared so well. My best wishes in this contest, a wonderful entry to judge...

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/16/2024 3:17:00 AM

Love the start of day, you wonder what surprises it will bring. Enjoy your weekend Valsa. Tom