FJ Thomas Poet Pantoum

A Moonlight Song - Yiruma

The embrace of silence the last paradise
walking in the forest when autumn finds winter.
A serenade in the moonlight turns my heart to ice;
through tears I could see you falling in love with her.

Walking in the forest when autumn finds winter
a silver line of white shadow wipes our histories. 
Through tears I could see you falling in love with her;
the moment time forgets painted memories.

A silver line of white shadow wipes our histories;
a serenade in the moonlight turns my heart to ice.
The moment time forgets painted memories;
the embrace of silence ...the last paradise.




04/04/2018
Artist: Yiruma
Titles:
A Moonlight Song
The Embrace of Silence 
The Last Paradise 
Walking in the Forest
Autumn Finds Winter
Serenade
Moonlight 
Heart
Tears
I Could See You
Falling in Love
Silver Line
White Shadow
The Moment 
Time Forgets
Painted
Memories

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Susan Ashley May 27, 2018 at 4:25 PM Returning with congratulations, FJ, for your wonderful win with your emotional poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan FJ Thomas May 29, 2018 at 11:33 AM Thank you Susan, very much :)

Eve Roper May 27, 2018 at 4:13 PM Awesome creative verse, Flo, congratulations on your Pantoum win... Hugs Eve FJ Thomas May 29, 2018 at 11:32 AM Thanks so much Eve :)

Susan Gentry May 24, 2018 at 7:11 PM Congratulations on your win in the music pentoum contest. Well done! :) FJ Thomas May 29, 2018 at 10:28 AM Hi Susan :) thank you very much.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2018 at 1:35 PM - Congratulations on your wonderful 3rd place in the contest, a great music choice Søster :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) FJ Thomas May 29, 2018 at 10:27 AM Thanks so much Søster ;*

Alexis Y. May 24, 2018 at 1:18 PM I'm just coming back to say congratulations to say congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis FJ Thomas May 29, 2018 at 10:27 AM Thank you Alexis ;)

Silent One May 24, 2018 at 12:34 PM Your poem is lovely FJ, would have been even better if it was a bit longer.. You did well to get all those titles in such a short poem though.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. FJ Thomas May 29, 2018 at 10:26 AM Thank you S1. I haven't the clarity to create longer poems of any substance as of late; but I hope maybe one day :) Thank you again.

Michelle Faulkner April 10, 2018 at 12:10 PM While I am not familiar with this artist, your pantoum is so lyrical and haunting! FJ Thomas April 10, 2018 at 2:25 PM It means a lot Michelle thank you so much. His song A River Flows Through You has played on a few movies. It's quite relaxing :)

Susan Ashley April 8, 2018 at 12:59 PM A beautiful and poignant pantoum Shadow. So rhythmic with lovely rhymes, your tender poetic lines flow seamlessly with the use of the song titles. Excellent and best wishes for a win! FJ Thomas April 8, 2018 at 2:10 PM Thank you so very much for all of your kind comments Susan. :)

Winged Warrior April 6, 2018 at 12:41 PM Excellent pantoum Shadow...very challenging to do...but not for you...best of luck and stay in the light...^WW^ FJ Thomas April 6, 2018 at 7:35 PM Warrior you tickle the ears dear sir. Thank you :)

Alexis Y. April 5, 2018 at 5:00 PM Hi Shadow , This is a really good Pantoum. Great use of the song titles. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis FJ Thomas April 6, 2018 at 7:34 PM Thanks so much Alexis. He actually had so many more titles than I would have guessed so I had to pass up some I absolutely loved. They just didn't fit it this one.

Carolyn Devonshire April 4, 2018 at 5:08 PM Your poem took me back to places and people I have not seen in a long time, Shadow. There was a time in a forest when a teen love and I carved our initials in a tree. Thank you for bringing that memory back to me. Very lovely imagery! FJ Thomas April 4, 2018 at 8:08 PM Thank you so very much Carolyn. I truly hope it was a good memory!