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A Moonbeams Blue Kiss

Oh Moonbeam As your diaphanous folds envelop my face … A singing wind heralds your arrival Trees swaying in time with her tempo Leaves the instruments of natures symphony Rustle in time with earths choir … My Grey negative retreat Turned into a slight blue heaven … Illuminating the most trivial of novelties coming alive at rays first kiss Light unfettered by earths embrace Magi in the night … Man in the moon Laughing gleefully at his delusion … My companion in the night trusted friend I feel wanting at your void Grey night overwhelms your hold luster fades and darkness conquers Your burnished blue brilliance … Moonlight Potent enchantment of radiance … Returning to embrace and enlighten euphoria a cold blue tendril Enliven a world bereft of illumination bringing magic moonlights great performance … Oh Moonbeam your delicate blue kiss warms a soul …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/18/2009 5:17:00 PM
Nice use of the imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/14/2009 1:57:00 PM
Jayne, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/14/2009 10:08:00 AM
Sheer delight this poem, a pleasure to read>>James
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Date: 7/13/2009 4:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Jayne. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2009 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poetry. More power and blessings. Ernilando
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Date: 7/12/2009 6:44:00 PM
Wow, very romantic write with wonderful alliteration, lovely imageries... Sensuality all the way... Great flow of words, this is a very creative piece. Congrats on your awesome poet being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke
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Date: 5/21/2009 7:20:00 AM
Lord of mercy, what a powerful way to start ... what a sweet melody of alliteration ... our burnished blue brilliance … great poet, do not stop singing ... love it
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