A Moonbeams Blue Kiss

Oh Moonbeam
As your diaphanous folds  envelop my  face …


A singing wind heralds your arrival
Trees swaying in time with her tempo
Leaves the instruments of natures symphony
Rustle in time with earths choir …


My Grey negative retreat
Turned into a slight blue heaven …


Illuminating 
the most trivial of novelties
coming alive at rays first kiss
Light unfettered by earths embrace 
Magi in the night …


Man in the moon
Laughing gleefully at his delusion …


My companion in the night
trusted friend I feel wanting at your void
Grey night overwhelms your hold 
luster fades and darkness conquers
Your burnished blue brilliance …


Moonlight 
Potent enchantment of radiance …


Returning to embrace and enlighten
euphoria a cold blue tendril
Enliven a world 
bereft of illumination
bringing magic 
moonlights great performance …


Oh Moonbeam
your delicate blue kiss warms a soul …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/18/2009 5:17:00 PM
Nice use of the imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/14/2009 1:57:00 PM
Jayne, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/14/2009 10:08:00 AM
Sheer delight this poem, a pleasure to read>>James
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Date: 7/13/2009 4:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Jayne. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2009 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poetry. More power and blessings. Ernilando
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Date: 7/12/2009 6:44:00 PM
Wow, very romantic write with wonderful alliteration, lovely imageries... Sensuality all the way... Great flow of words, this is a very creative piece. Congrats on your awesome poet being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke
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Date: 5/21/2009 7:20:00 AM
Lord of mercy, what a powerful way to start ... what a sweet melody of alliteration ... our burnished blue brilliance … great poet, do not stop singing ... love it
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