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A Monoku For Peace

An eye for an eye ~ blinds us to see ~ beauty and love in you and me

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/5/2021 9:36:00 AM

A gem Arturo. love phyl

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/25/2020 12:01:00 PM

Vey true and poignant ...

Alkas Poetry

Date: 11/26/2020 5:31:00 AM

Saints are your words cause the Lord Gave inspiration for these,,, magnificent! salute alkas

Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/15/2020 9:15:00 AM

Beautifully written, Arturo. We should all think this way :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2020 7:49:00 AM

Good play on words. Reminds me of the Bible. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Arturo Michael
Date: 11/10/2020 1:00:00 PM

Thank Sare...All the best to you...

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/30/2020 7:58:00 PM

Oh, so true and so filled with compassion. A deep and meaningful monoku, Arturo. Your potent pen stirs our better angels. Beautiful! Warmest wishes, mon ami.. ~Susan

Paul Callus

Date: 9/5/2020 7:32:00 AM

A meaningful one-liner which says a lot in so few words, Arturo. May love show us the way. Regards // paul

John Fleming

Date: 9/4/2020 12:57:00 AM

A nice thought World peace, Arturo...but until then it would be best we keep our swords sharp and our eyes wide open. A nicely penned Monoku I do say though. My best regards! :) john

Arturo Michael
Date: 9/5/2020 6:26:00 AM

The world seems unsaveable...Thanks John ...All the best

John Gondolf

Date: 7/30/2020 2:37:00 AM

Nicely stated, Arturo, it seems our society has become so polarized we never take time to see the good in each other. Cheers, John

Arturo Michael
Date: 8/21/2020 6:00:00 AM

There're a few things we as a race must get over to live in peace...and we will...maybe not in your time or mine...Thanks John

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/27/2020 1:58:00 PM

Powerful words and so true. love phyl

Arturo Michael
Date: 8/21/2020 6:01:00 AM

Thanks Phyllis...

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/18/2020 11:01:00 PM

This is perfect, Michael. Spot on. Revenge and rants quickly get out of hand. ~ Love and Peace, Gershon

Arturo Michael
Date: 7/24/2020 10:37:00 AM

Thank you Gershon... The cycle of revenge never ends...it's best eliminate everyone and start over again...like the old testament and the new...

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/18/2020 4:46:00 PM

Thoughtful one liner, Arturo. Janice

Arturo Michael
Date: 7/24/2020 10:38:00 AM

Thanks Janice

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/18/2020 2:57:00 PM

So true Arturo. Great one :)

Arturo Michael
Date: 7/24/2020 10:38:00 AM

Thank you Heidi

Eve Roper

Date: 7/18/2020 1:49:00 PM

so very true. great imagery

Arturo Michael
Date: 7/24/2020 10:39:00 AM

True indeed...

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/18/2020 10:26:00 AM

Hi Arturo, a brilliant Monoku for peace, Hope we all experience it soon. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Arturo Michael
Date: 7/18/2020 11:40:00 AM

Thanks Jennifer...Once we each make a contribution to peace...we will get the blessings...

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/17/2020 12:28:00 PM

Hi Arturo. Well done my friend. Panagiota

Arturo Michael
Date: 7/18/2020 11:41:00 AM

Thanks Panagiota...All the best

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/16/2020 11:19:00 AM

Few words with much said. "Powerful" Can't wait to read your next write. Have a wonderful and blessed day writing away...........

Arturo Michael
Date: 7/18/2020 11:41:00 AM

Thank you Paula...All the best

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/16/2020 9:57:00 AM

Great one liner my friend...very true Arturo...best wishes,,,^WW^ :o)

Arturo Michael
Date: 7/18/2020 11:42:00 AM

Thank you WW...Keep flying my friend

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/15/2020 12:16:00 PM

How true! A perfect monoku, Arturo. If we truly opened our eyes, we would see this is the case. Hope we find harmony in my lifetime, but we may have strayed too far. Hugs, Carolyn

Arturo Michael
Date: 7/18/2020 11:44:00 AM

It will be achieve...maybe in what's left of our time...I hope so...Thanks Carolyn