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A Moment's Wisp

I felt the Sun breathe it's life 
as you became 
revealed inside a dream of golden fire
touching in a rainbow hue of colors 
resting on a dying mist
living but 
a moment's wisp.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/3/2009 9:47:00 PM
Jeff, this fine poem showcases your poetic talent!! jim
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