A Moment's Wisp

I felt the Sun breathe it's life 
as you became 
revealed inside a dream of golden fire
touching in a rainbow hue of colors 
resting on a dying mist
living but 
a moment's wisp.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 3, 2009 at 9:47 PM
Jeff, this fine poem showcases your poetic talent!! jim
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